This story was quite educational and yet an engaging to see someone worked on what happened with the whole braces situation back then

When are you gonna finish off the Epic Sitch storyline. Cause I wanna find out, how and when Kim dies, and if Cin gets together with Ted.

Rereading this for the umpteenth time.

Still one of my favorites.

Love these guys so much.

Joe

another great story i really like your work very original and fresh hope you fill those emptys stories of the show like with walter nelson

big..?..huh...? didnt get that one until the end

So cute! Nice story!

Would I consider this the definitive account of the Walter Nelson incident? Yes I would-until something better comes across my radar.

We have a story that expounds on the incident referred to in K. . It provides a basic outline and fleshes that outline out with references to still other stories. It portrays Kim and Ron in a manner consistant with the series-both their best and worst traits. It applies the life lessons of the incident to a parallel occurance years later. And as far as I can see, does all that while remaining true to the source material-because I know you're a stickler for the canon. And it even rings true from a realistic viewpoint. It doesn't sound contrived.

Did I come off sounding like an articulate literary critic, or just a pompous know-it-all? Probably the latter. Good fic.

Re: the scenes with the elderly Kim & Shego: did you base those off the pencil drawings Lionheartcartoon had in his dA gallery-Where Kim is bellowing to a deaf-as-a-post Shego?

This story made me very happy. Sad too. Poor KP and Ron, but we can clearly see a beautiful future for their family. T_T

Man, your writing style is awesome. Very badical indeed. Keep on writing.

Danny

that was a very sweet story i enjoyed it very much

Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)(did ron die?)

God, this fic was so sweet! I loved it!

Great job, very touching!

Yeah, yeah, the story was great as always but I need to know if anyone has seen my Atomizer? With some suggestions from G-Go, I recently had it fixed by one of the local kids who knows how to program a VCR. We got a bit carried away and added treads and a solar panel and it disappeared.

Last I heard, it's headed up Hwy 67 North, in Arkansas, having removed the obstacle formally known as Little Rock. Last time it got away it was stopped at the fire break that God so thoughtfully provided, the break is referenced on the map as the Mississippi River.

Now I'm not concerned so much about the Atomizer as the military always gets it stopped. What I do need is my Space Time Lockdown Device that was laying on the control panel. So if anyone comes across the Atomizer, and is lucky enough to survive, I'd sure be grateful if you'd return the STLD to me and there's a big BBQ dinner waiting for you when you get out of the hospital.

You know, even after such a long time together, it's still sad for Kim to lose Ron that way.

That said, man, am I glad I never had to wear braces! (though I guess I can feel a little bad for Walter NELSON)

Thanks!

Excellent! Poor Cin; she didn't know just how much of a nerve she touched bringing up 'the food chain.'

I'll be sure to check out that devArt page.

Heh heh heh! Big hands and feet. Love it! Nice story, Mr. Dr. P. Solid characterization, funny without being silly, with just a touch of sadness for flavoring.