You've done some good stories, but this one was way way way off the mark.
It was always Kara running away, pulling away worried that Lee would wind up leaving her.
Their is just no way that Lee is walking away from Kara when she does not want him too and she has told him so. NO WAY. This just feels really contrived and not at all true to the characters. The way your narrative goes its basically if Lee had asked she would have left Sam and Lee gives her a lecture aand walks away? AU stories are great but if they dont at least try to maintain the basic traits of the key characters they feel very flat, really contrived. What you have is a soap operaand the people given names from this one just did'nt work on too many levels.

That was not a well done story. I couldn't even recognize the characters. There is NO WAY Lee just leaves kara when she is willing to be with him - not gonna happen. where did you get this retarded ida from. So your story is after this Lee goes back to Dee? God I'm crying im laughing at you so hard.
This story is so bad i was actually cringing. Tjhe characters are like two fools from a soap opera that you just gave names form bsg.

Take up macrame cause i can see writing is not your thing

wow, brilliant fic! Absolutely fantastic especially the twist at the end, really didn't see that coming.

Wow. I've got some music that I've been using to get me in the mood for a Lee/Kara piece and it just rolled right in and took over here too.

This is so frakking good. I have nothing else to add except this:

They were once Apollo and Starbuck. Legends in the sky. They were supposed to be timeless. They were supposed to be unbreakable.

In the end, they were none of those things.

may have actually caused my heart to break a tiny bit.

Brilliant... you had me crying by the end. :)

Another outstanding possibility from you! Now, onto the sequel!

That was so sad. But very believable. And while I don't think they are poison for each other, I do think, because they aren't honest with each other they're relationship will never reach it's potential.

Thanks for another great story Em.

:):):):)

::sigh::

You always know how to make me smile and cry at the same time. This was beautiful. Thanks you!

This was wonderful! I loved this fic!

I could SO see this being exactly what happens between them. They ARE bad for each other and they both know it - but like moths drawn to a flame they just can't help themselves.

It explains the frostiness between Lee and Dee, and why Lee became 'fat Lee' in LDYB2.

Wonderful - it was beautiful and sad, heartwarming and heartbreaking all at the same time. Beautiful writing.

really beautiful and sad. fantastic work.

Great story! I hated that they weren't together, and yet it felt real. Thank you once again for a wonderful story!

Come on! You gotta give us more of the story. The birds need to fly free! :D

That was wonderful. Thank you so much for writing all these beautiful stories, they are keeping me sane while I impatiently wait for the return of BSG.

This was wonderful - very melancholy, but so right. The angst is palpable!