Hahah how do you just switch species? Unless the moment she wished for escape, and entered Middle Earth, that she switched species.

Early in the story, I noticed that the famed elvish nobility and grace was almost completely absent. Oh well.

Ten chapters on, this hasn't changed, and the story is still focussing on Elves in Rivendellwithout a sense of any elvish culture at all.

Hot kinky sex in a library...

Dramione anyone?

Hmmm I don't know how to feel about this chapter other than distressed and affronted on Kate's behalf. Weapons lessons side the time she has had to learn them is no where near enough to be effective in real life experience. Firstly she learning to at the same time and she wasn't spending all day every day dedicated to them. This means she is in fact more of a liability and as she said likely to get killed. Unless she is going full mary sue and becoming a sudden master but I thought the point was she wasn't? Speaking of which they say she needs to be there because of Almira but then why didn't they just uninvite her? There is no reason for her to be there and they could keep her under guard to stop her following. I mean I get why this has to happen because if it doesn't there is no plot, I just don't agree with how you went about it my suspension of disbelief doesn't cover it.

The worst part was them deciding this behind her back. They may have got her to go along with them but they did this after they had already decided for her. Considering she could very well die I find this wrong on so many levels, they should have discussed it with her first, she is not an object. Why should she risk herself for a world not her own? Even if she was inclined to she had a point about her knowledge being dangerous in the wrong hands, it would be better for the two of them to stay where they are and not making things worst. I don't know I wish she had held a grudge longer than she did, ah well it is your story and I did like that twist you added with the previous earth people having been there.

I'm afraid to tell you author but I fear I must, unfortunately both your characters are Mary sue's. Almira is simply also a fan girl however just because your main character is not an fake egomaniac does not mean she is free of Sueness. In fact you could say in a way due to the fact every one likes, the fact she has already made connections to several main important characters (love interest/little sister) despite just meeting them, the whole elf dress transforming her to turn heads...ah it's not really bothering me other than making me confused you don't understand what a marysue is beyond one stereotype.

That said maybe this is on purpose as ironic humor? And even if it isn't despite the fact both of them suffer this flaw I find myself enjoying this story. You real are quite talented at writing and I enjoy the flawless way you employ tone changes to keep things balances between funny and serious. I also like how you have your main character also engage with side characters as if they matter equally as much. It is quite refreshing to read as well as the fact you aren't afraid to give your character some flaws. Anyways I really do enjoy the way you write banter, they are some of my favorite moments. Overall an enjoyable read.

I am glad Almira had a change of heart...I was very suspicious of her when she first changed but I quite like how her character has turned out

I can not wait until Kate meets Thranduil

I remember reading this story a couple of years ago and it just made the biggest mark on me. Every couple of years I'll get this strange urge to re-read it, which I always inevitably do. It's just such an amazing piece of work. The characterization, the plot, the dialogue,,,,,,,just everything! I'm now gearing up to read through it once again, and be transported into Middle Earth :') Just an awesome job and I hope you can continue it soon!

There's a little song in Spanish that says: No estaba muerto, andaba de parranda, something like He/she/I wasn't dead, just partying.
I'm sorry it's been so long until I got to read all you have been writing (it's like 3 chapters I neglected you). It's been a long couple of years for me, but I do not and I will not grow out of fanfics, specially some so lovely as this, more than anything when you do such an effort to keep it going.
For starters: I'm quite impressed with this girls’ resilience, they’re almost hobbits in that sense, I would have been a mix of both reactions and kept it going until giving up of pure exhaustion, wailing my heart out of the trauma until just being in shock of what had just happened.
Even more, I think they did a pretty decent job trying to explain what happened to others, I would have been almost unable to talk about it to anyone at all for a time, until I unraveled it and talked with someone who could understand, I think I would have had called for Eruanna and the others as a lifeline out of that madness (I don’t even know how they did it in the first place, when there were not any other world travelers).
Maybe it’s because I’ve been in the other side that it has troubled me so much, the person losing a loved one to suicide… After reading these chapters I kept thinking about it… if I ever found that person and it was something around the same experience, I don’t think I could keep me from hitting him senseless and then crying my heart out again, I think it has been the worst experience I ever had. I didn’t see it coming and I don’t understand what happened… He was my cousin, we were raised as siblings and loved each other deeply even if we were so different from each other. While I do have experience with that kind of heavy depression, he never seemed troubled by that kind of health issues, plus he was an excellent athlete, sociable, very smart, very capable at most things he did, not more sad or happy than any other person, just a regular (and very handsome) guy. At that time, he had problems with his girlfriend, but it was never as if he was so depressed, the change his coach perceived was only that he stopped going to train, and complained to another cousin about his love life, but it wasn’t *that* weird, he was working on his thesis and having love related issues so… It wasn’t such a big worry flag for any of his family or friends. Maybe he just was better at hiding it than I was, I usually got help because it was so evident I was wilting before their eyes.
I feel like sharing this because… well, you have got near the topic and I can’t speak about it with my family, everyone has their own theory and try to keep it going, to think about it or talk about it with others around me is a bit tricky, a bit for myself (I did get help after his funeral and it did wonders) but so much more to the others who are still dealing with the most immediate needs of grief. But even if I am better now, there are days I would just bring him back to (almost) kill him myself for causing me this grief of living without him. It’s so much worse than losing people to accidents or sickness, (big family, happens at least once every decade), and so much worse when is someone so dear…
I can’t imagine what the girls feel, but just being on the other side, it makes me feel they must be feeling so broken, much more than they let the people see…
I’m sorry for filling your review with sad musings about suicide, I wish I could give you something else, at least something productive or some encouragement, because you’ve done an excellent job with this fic and I do love it very much. Thank you for keep it going!
Lots of love!

Stop making fun of Canadians.

I am so happy you updated! Great chapter as usual... Can't wait for the next :)

personally if i was stuck there with a mary suei woulda asked them to kill me in the blandest tone possible... or murdered said mary sue

THE HECK?! WHAT KIND OF CLIFFHANGER WAS THAT?

WHERE DID SHE GO?!
O_0
Ugh. I hate you author chan. But I also love you for engulfing me in this absolutely magnificent tale of yours xD

The fluff is hitting me in the heart man. Please stop. I need to go to sleep. Stop making me click next chapter! XD

Amira' change is surprising, but nice. And you nearly busted my lip cuz when they kissed I started fangirling on my bed. XD. It's like eleven pm omg don't make me wake my parents up.