So we not going to acknowledge that lily didn't process Snape's death?

Why did I cry when Bill and Charlie apologised? Why did I cry the whole chapter long?

Sweet story, well-written and fun.

To the reviewer lordlexx you said Harry and Ginny don't make sense in canon did you read the books or just watched the movies? I knew after the first book Harry and Ginny where going to end up together. Harry and Hermione as friends makes absolutely no sense. He grew up being bossed around and she is bossy he grew up being treated like a house elf and she wants to free the house elves but doesn't think Harry I can go on and on how bad she has treated harry after the 4th book if I was harry I be using her as a human shield against Voldemort. Ginny's just as smart as Hermione Ginny's best friend is Luna and Luna is a Ravenclaw which they as supposed to be very smart and smart people don't have stupid friends only other smart people Ginny is a lot more powerful witch then Hermione (which is said in every book) so anyone who thinks Harry should have been with Hermione is a moron or they can't read

While I prefer HHr, I really don't mind stories like this that rewrite the whole story to make HG actually make sense. That was always my biggest problem with that pairing in canon.

Alice is an awfully violent woman... I made my wife laugh during both births of my children.

So now we are supposed to feel sorry for Draco?

Nice attempt to cover you ass with the custody bit but you still went about it the wrong way. While I agree that Draco living with Andromeda would have not gone over well, she should have been in court to make her statement and her reason why.

I'm guessing you didn't pay much attention to the books or movies. Andromeda Tonks would be his closest living relative being Narcissa's sister and his aunt. Sirius is his first cousin once removed. The same relation that Nymphdora Tonks has to Sirius.

You seem to be pulling a JKR and not getting this basalisk chopped up for monies.

There's a lack of a Luna going on here.

Harry being punished is fine, understandable really. Him being punished for 5 years is fucking stupid. Its not like he was unsupervised. And James Potter was a chaser.

A little underwhelming there for the adult Potters.

Dear god, you're still writing in this horrible style all the way throughout the story. Please stop.

Your scenes are ridiculously short. Even in these tiny chapters, each one manages to include like 4 scenes each. As a result, the flow of your story is constantly broken up and it just reads like we're being told tiny parts of a story rather than actually experiencing and being shown something coherent.