This story has a lot of imagery and it's well written for the most part. The story was interesting but a little too angsty for my taste and some parts seemed unnecessarily drawn out or misplaced. It was hard to tell from whose point of view you were writing from at times leaving some chapters in absolute chaos and confusion. Certain words or phrases were overused but that's probably just the writing style and not really a fault. It was also hard to tell sometimes when one scene was switching to another but I saw that you got better at illuminating that to your readers over time. Well done regardless of my criticism! This could easily be a book.

oh my... oh my. That was EXCELLENT! I just finished your story (or where its at) and I must say, it is so well done! I love the characterisations of everyone (esp. Yazoo) and I must congratulate you on a job well done. I really like this story, so please continue with it. Looking forward to an update soon!

-Ybs

Just read all of this in one sitting. YOU MUST UPDATE! This story is so insanely gripping, I just have to know what happens next! PLEASE update ASAP!

Waa who got shot! Hey you're not gonna leave it like that will you? Oh man,waiting is always the worts:(

Did you abandon us? Who got shot...

Ah! I used to hate Yazoo, when he was on AC, but then you go and write this story. I just simply love him! Please don't kill him! Kill Loz... I don't like him... ha, just kidding.

All in all, it's simply a great Yuffietine! Though I'm kinda confused with the other original characters... I'm going to go and read the whole thing one more time )

Please, UPDATE!

How did I miss finding this? Very nice. Next time I'm on a computer that will actually let me sign in, this is going on my favorites.

LOVE!

Please, please please, don't kill Yazoo! I mean, Yuffie's at the Lifestream's doorstep, Soleil is probably too (if not fully inside drinking tea whith Aerith and asking Sepiroth why they look alike), and I mean it's just too much!

Now if it moves the story along far be it beyond me to stop you, it is after all your story. How I love the angsty-ish, kinda twisted/dark Yuffentines, I think they show the true nature of the pairing beyond the lightharted fluff I write. Sometimes I need to beat myself over the head with my lamp...

Don't worry about the time just as long as you update, ya know? I know what it's like with all the college work swamping you down.

i know I should just read on and find out but I have to say my theories before that, it's just a thing I have to do.

I think Either Cloud was attempting to commit suicide but Yazoo hit his hand out of the way and caused Cloud to miss so he hit his stomach.

Cloud was going to kill Yazoo, Yazoo turned sepiroth under the pressure, and fought (for self defence mind you) then turned back and ran away in shame.

Random bear attack?

Ahem. -stands very very still-

OHMYGOSH! I love Yazoo, I LOVE Yazoo, I love YAZOO, I LOVE YAZOO! He's just so GLOMPABLE! And I ablsolutley ADORE the Yuffie and Yazoo interaction, it's like she's his big sister or best friend or mom or something! X3

Cid's a riot, a chain-smoking, tea-drinking, tacktless riot, and that's why we love him.

And Yazoo, DOES NOT look like a girl. The term is -in fangirl language-"Bishie". As in an anime guy who looks like a girl, acts like a guy, and is preferably equipped with an evil stear/side/tendecy/anything.

Oh, cliffhangery... please update! Like lots!

I'd like to encourage you to continue and finish this captivating story. I read the entire 25 chapters in one day. I love it when there are so many chapters to read but it was a sad moment when I came to the last chapter because now I have to wait for updates...I was so spoiled, getting to each cliffhanger and then being able to read the next chapter immediately.

Please don't get discouraged and quit on us. You know you have a lot of folks following this story. We need for you to keep this going...it does sound like the story means a lot to you and it is easy to see by how well written and thought out it is.

Now that I am caught up, I'll be reviewing every chapter from here on out. Keep up the good work.

mar

You have a beautifully poetic way of phrasing things that goes so well, I think, with a man as tortured as Vincent. Please continue.

You've done it again, you've done it again! Lordy lord you've done it again!

This story is still perfection. I must confess that I, too, was thinking that you had abandoned this story. I was so happy when, on a whim, I decided to check my AOL email and lo! A notification for this story! _

I now feel kind of inspired to work on my story. :)

Very awesome story I can't wait for more chapter's. I really like the little scene with the character Zuri it was very well written