| Reviews for Betrayal's Reward |
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   nihongogakusei chapter 25 . 7/6 Read your work ages ago. I'm glad it's still here. |
| D4rkpunch chapter 2 . 6/29 doesn't made any fucking sense... |
| Kakyouin Noriaki chapter 9 . 1/26/2019 Total trash. |
| Artekha chapter 3 . 10/20/2018 The first two chapters were a hard read but I’m looking forward to the rest. |
| TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 Garbage. |
| Easal chapter 5 . 6/3/2018 The story has an interesting idea. Why I read it. However, after the first few chapters, I am bothered by 2 things. 1. The trial. How long have you wanted to pull this one? After a third of the chapter, I just skipped the rest because nothing important seemed to happen when Ranma was portrayed as a cold-blooded psycho. 2. The fight against Doc Ock. How long can you extend a combat scene against a normal man, without powers, who has some mechanical tentacles on his back? We're talking about Ranma Saotome, the guy who wrecks walls with regularity, fought against opponents who can easily compete with Marvel enemies. He (or at least his clone) tore a few ordinary people in the air and now it takes him forever to defeat Doc Ock. What's the crap? Under, let's not forget the lessons he learned in prison. Sorry but as well as you Ranma represent he is just the same idiot as in Nerima (not that I have something against Ranma). |
| asdfgbvcxz3355 chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 shit story |
| Zero Rewind chapter 6 . 3/9/2018 Over-westernization of Ranma. You can tell this was written by a weeb. |
| Acesnowlightning chapter 25 . 1/17/2018 Awesome story and this is the first review of 2018. |
| HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 1 . 11/8/2017 Blah blah blah. |
| wufiei chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 this will be my 4th time reading this. good fanfic. any chance of a sequel? |
| Natalie-E-G chapter 25 . 6/24/2017 I just finished Betrayal's Reward. What ever happened with Mephistopheles? Did the one attack by Electro and crowd satisfy him? |
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/17/2017 "Flight of Chairs" Kind of like the imagery that brings to mind. Though one thing comes to mind is if the 'genetic imbuement' passed down Amnar style gender-changing to Ranma and Felica's children. Judging by the dialog it seems that the answer is 'not-actively'. Although it could be open ended as to that particular status. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/16/2017 I can imagine at least some people might want that 'merged curse', depending on how it mixes. Though less if it's like the carnie show attraction kind. (The vertical split thing, one half having a beard and whatnot.) |
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 25 . 1/26/2017 Any chance of a sequel? |
