How are Dustpaw and Sandpaw together? They're brother and sister! Otherwise great...

So sweet please do more about different characters

Awww so sad! I feel bad for Dustpelt, Sandstorm should have been with him instead!

Wow. I liked this.. poor Dustpelt! But it was still awesome! :D

I'm gonna cry! -starts sobing like crazy- I love this couple now!

You evil Firestar! you don't diserve her! -coutinues to cry-

I absolutely love it. So cute. I don't care for FirexSand, and this is delightful. I don't think One-shot are fillers for you. I think they're awesome inspiration. YAY!

*~Aquastream

poor dustpelt. . .

aw another sad oneshot... so sad! poor dustpelt! but i always loved dust x sand pairing! so cute!

nice

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I'm sorry...that was so heart breaking. I love that pair...but I love Ferncloud/Dustpelt as well.

omg, this is such a sweet fic, u have to write more like this; liek about Graystripe had to let Silverstream go... stuffs like that. This is awesome!

mysterys

OMG! If u hadn't put the little ending thing, I would have burst into tears. That's really sad! But god... : )

- Darkstorm

I really found it moving and romantic. But slightly OOC, on Dustpelt's behalf. And another thing, Longtail was the one that called out to Firepaw, not Darkstripe, but this is cute and I love reading it!

I liked it, but LONGTAIL fought Firestar, and DARKSTRIPE mentored Dustpelt after Redtail.

oops. That was longtail who challenged Firepaw. Might wanna fix that