Oh man! I’m hoping the next chapter has some Kind of epilogue. You left it so open!

The step mother does something right for once!

Wow I didn’t expect that.

Oh! Great culmination here. Choices, choices.

Intriguing!

I’m really enjoying it. I love Henry and the mystery of the magic hazelnuts.

Great story so far. I love the style.

this is such an amazing and u r also amazing for writing something like this masterpiece

I've only just started this storybook it sounds like an awesome story and I like how you've adapted the story from the original Cinderella.

Hmm well I like how descriptive you were even though this was a short chapter. You loosely followed the original story, which is preferred. For a short funny story, it's better when it follows the story to the T. But if you add things here and there it is basically branded as your own. I like how you gave a backstory as the prince is dancing with Cinderella. Kind of like a reflection as to how she got to that point.

I think she should marry Henry.

Hmm. Wonder how she's gonna talk her way out of this one.

Wow Freddy. What a winner.

Nooooo Emma nononooooo

Ugh neither Emma. I'm sure there are better men out there.