In Diamond & Pearl they introdue the Light & Dark Stones. Guess it's now 1 of 9 then. Seth Jerk. They both like Fire types? Kay, but then why do the have the Eevee evo's that aren't fire? Read through your story, several spelling typos (No offense). Update next story soon!

It's very good, but like it has been said before, you should add something that makes your story mor unique, I mean the story is very typical, so add something that allows people to recognize it.

Well, what the first reviewr told you, add more development to the plot, like why her, how did she became the chosen one, etc...

Not very much to add to what Lizzie said, but just to tell you that what she said isn't something that only she believes.