Very cool. I stayed up untileleven last night to read this, and now it's six in the morning, and I have to go to school! Great job.

YEEGAD! Sometimes you really screw up alien speech with human slang! Also, This thing with V3's libido has really gotten out of hand (Yes, it sounds like something I'd write, but still... and third, Shaeron seems like every jacked-up female Andalite written, with falling in love with Elfangor: TOO PERFECT! I mean, god, give her some faults!

Great story. Just remember that it's Loren, not Lauren. And Tobias found out that Elfangor was his father in "The Pretender". All in all though you did great! Keep it up! :)

You are a piece of for ever writing such a ty piece of ass. All i want to say is F**K you