Excellent grasp of the tone of the original (at least on the Eddings side, I couldn't say for the other...). Well written style, and quite intriguing. I eagerly await a continuation.

*squeals*

Love, love, love this story 333.

Bevier is so well written.

I really like this story, it's brilliant! Shanpu's great and you write really well. I hope you update soon!

:D been a while. Got time to get back to the story at last, hu?

Good chapter and ho-ra!

Wow, I am absolutely loving this story, I feel you have Sir Bevier's character perfectly :) I can't wait to read more.

Thanks

While this is a bit late, a very interesting story that I do hope is picked up and continued.

Hey just remembered how much i enjoyed this story any plans for an update?

Good Chapter. Things seem to be progressing nicely. Hope to see more of it soon. :D

Interesting story! Please continue.

xDeathQueenx

I loved it. Thank you very much for the update. Things are moving at a very nice pace and the interactions are wonderful. I love your chapter titles as well!

Still, this is a great story and you are very talented with writing and with handling the characters. I love seeing it updated again! Please keep it up! And if you need a beta, I wouldn't mind throwing a hand in to help.

Thank you so much for updating. I really enjoyed this chapter!

I am so happy to see this updated! Great writing, it's always very enjoyable to read. Has little Flute made herself an appearance in this chapter?

ANother chapter YAY!

Guess this was a filler chapter, as to me it didint seem to go anywhere much...

Strange people talking in her head...

And when WILL Bevier come charging in with Axe-a-flying?

Tune in next time for more action and adventure...

Wait a minute, i aint the auther here

Good story, waiting for the next instalment

This was a lovely chapter!