This was beautiful. I loved every word. :3

Gk

U

You are a great writer and have good potential. I had to remind myself many times that this was not canon, it was so good. If you write canon, you might have a chance of getting publshed

Good

This was an amazing story, I love that you stuck with cannon up to the point of Palpatine's reveal. The way you altered the story and had anikan stay good was brilliant.

Must say I would be interested in a sequel to see what happens next with the characters but you also left it at a beautiful place

Whoa, there are no words! No words at all!
This was... Phenomenal. Well, that's one word.
Really, though, great job in this. The whole story was fantastic. Thank you, author-sempai. :)

God you surprised me with Han ! But how old is he ? Not too old I hope because it’s gonna make things creepy with Leia

Ok... things are getting clearer. At first I thought that this chapter was a flashback to sometime before Obi-Wan and Siri had their conversation but apparently no

Wow man, I’m confused as hell ! When is this taking place ? Did Anakin just kill Palpatine ? When did Siri leave the Order ? Did you’ve realise you that one line you wrote at the beginning makes it seem like Anakin is married to Siri ? Did Siri have visions of the future and what could’ve happened, had Anakin turned to the Dark Side ?

So many questions

And shouldn't Han be about 10? (At least from the EU he was 10 years older than Leia...) more than that gets a little awkward...

Would have loved for for Siri to have said 'if he's old then what am I?' since she's only 2 years younger than Obi-Wan...

This story was fantastic! I really loved it! XD Thank you so much for writing!

Great chapter and plot

...*ew*, he was ancient, and she was so young...