Wait the bold girl, that's Chatoya?

Okay I have a question ... Why do these people have like 3 different names? Do they just have like a cover name or something then a real name? I think so but I'm still a little confused well toodles :D I like your story

What the FREAK? That girl is like soooo freaky sounding! I am literally scared to death right now and I have a very image making brain and her face is headed into my mind forever now D: I'm scare I think she's watching me! Somewhere eeech!

Love it! But then again I love any story with Blue in it...

what does Vous êtes mon âme mean and Laissez-moi toucher votre coeur caché mean ? :)

perfect ending... the sweetest pairing EVER! major love for them both!

Oh...Heh. Of course Aspen was a girl in his past life - he was always a very feminine character.

Oh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS AMAZING!

okay, just need to calm down for a second...

alright.

This is crazy! Every time I finish reading one of your stories, I have the same response: "Oh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS AMAZING!" I must be starting to sound like a parrot now! In Chimera, the first one of your L.J. Smith fics that I read, I thought that Aspen was pretty cool, and then in Ripples, I loved that Cecilia was there, because you always need a Salone! Then after reading this... well, I'd happily take Tam's place! I think that Aspen would have to be one of my favorite characters from your fics! ( I also loove Lace Stormstrong [I think that's right!] from Chimera!)

That was bloody brilliant!

I love that there is soo much intense action, and then these really touching bits, and then some parts when I'm laughing so hard I have to stuff a fist in my mouth to keep from waking everyone up! ( and that's because I stay up late after everyones asleep not being able to close the laptop reading your fics! )

Whenever I show up to class with this crazy look in my eye and start freaking out and babbling nonsense trying to explain stuff in a rush... well, my friends have figured out that I have read another fic of yours.

They've also figured out that I won't stop bugging them until I've exhausted myself and my toung!

I can't wait for the next chappie of Ripples!

Here's a rose for you!

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dat was an absolutely wiked story, i lurved it

altho its kepin me in suspense bout Rob, wats gonna appen? ill av 2 read mo 2 find out...

jus wanna say thanx as well, ur really reallt good,

carry on...

tc, xox

This is such a lovely little story. I really like Tam and Aspen, both together and as individual characters. They mesh very well.

I thought the plot twist was interesting as well, particularly since I perceive Aspen as a somewhat feminine character.

On a side note, I think it'd be helpful if you'd put these stories of Ryars Valley into some sort of chronological order via the title. I found it difficult, because I couldn't figure out which story came first until I was actually immersed in reading them.

That was a good story. Will u make a story about Blue Malcefi and Chayota Irkil

Aspen is an extremely lovable vampire. The entire backstory of a past love triangle gone wrong (and Aspen's hapless luck in having once been a girl- the entire character you have created fits) made the story all the more complex. I seem to be reading your chronicles all out of order, but each story only adds to the complex verse that is your stories. This could be published- if you ever do create a work that hits the publishing houses, please let me know. I may have said this before, but I have a very short memory for things I've said- I'd rather remember stories like this. I look forward to reading your works, both old and new- it may take me a while, to get through everything. That is not at all a sad event- a prolific writer of your talent is to be thoroughly enjoyed for as long as possible.

Nicely done. I liked how tough and practical Tam was.

That was great...just read nightfire and remember. i so did not see that twist at the end of remember. i was reading ur comments about reviews and i noticed that u said that nightfire is the 6th fires of fate story. wot r the others? can u let me know plz? if u want my email addy is .Thanx so much...bout 2 start chimera now! keep writing!

Such comic relief were Blue's lines..."maybe it's Maybelline" hahahaha! And the one about keeping his heart in a jar next to his bed...aww, I'm so glad Tam and Aspen ended up together! I need that after your absolutely horribly heart-wrenching ending to Chimera...