| Reviews for Out of Control |
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   Bennyweirlover17 chapter 10 . 6/10/2018 perfect ending |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 9 . 6/10/2018 love it |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 8 . 6/10/2018 very nice |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 7 . 6/10/2018 cool |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 6 . 6/10/2018 awesome |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 5 . 6/10/2018 amazing |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 4 . 6/10/2018 wonderful |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 3 . 6/10/2018 great |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 2 . 6/10/2018 good |
| Bennyweirlover17 chapter 1 . 6/10/2018 nice |
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/6/2016 Hey, This was a really awesome story, but I was kind of hoping maybe you could write one where Casey gets pregnant with Derek's baby then he goes into a coma and then she finds out she is pregnant (like in this one) but that Derek doesn't wake up until the baby is born (like maybe he wakes up when Casey lays the baby next to him and the baby's cries somehow wake him up or something) and also maybe she doesn't tell the family that it's his baby while she's pregnant until after the baby is born, I kinda like that idea for a story but I'm not that great at writing (at least not as great as you are) |
| amyh52 chapter 10 . 3/11/2014 love the story |
| amyh52 chapter 5 . 3/11/2014 this is crazy ahhh |
| eagermeager chapter 4 . 9/21/2012 Derek snorted. "I wish. Truth is… it's the only thing I think about." See, you can't have Derek just spill the beans. He's not overtly honest like that, which is why the character is falling flat. Derek teases, retaliates, pranks but he's not emotional. Not like that. Also; try and add banter between the two of them. They aren't saccharin sweet around the other. |
| eagermeager chapter 3 . 9/21/2012 The stories are gradually getting better, as is your character depth. I rather like the way you have your plot going. |
