it was okay, but it went in circles most of the time. it got really confusing because you kept switching point of view. one minute you would use 'I' and 'my' and then the next you would use 'he' or 'she,' 'his' or 'her.' you also kept switching people a lot, so it took a bit to figure out whose point of view it was. if you ever edit this, maybe you should mark when the person changes and make sure the writing style stays the same, whether it be third person or first.

This is a great story! What's the sequal called? I want to read it! I'm sure that it's as amazing as this one! :) :]

I love it! This is a wonderful story! Amazing even! I will deffenitly be checking your porfile for more stories!

oh no! is it over? i love it love it love it! this is one of my favorite stories by far! ar eyou going to write any more?

I have to say, I really liked the style of this fanfic. Good job. Do you have others? If you like fairytale novels, you might want to consider this one that I wrote.

I HOPE YOUR MAKING A 2ND BOOK! you could have a little friendship turn into romance, troubled romance and so much more! please make another 1!

Aw... lovely pieces of thought! Perfect epilogue, and I'm awaiting the sequel

YOU ARE DOING A SEQUEL? GOOD! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY THINGY!

You are WELCOME! I'm so glad your update was so soon! :D I loved this chapter! I thought it was funny reading the journel of Averill when he said a bad word, ink was spilled on the page. All in all, it was a very interesting chapter. It was kinda like an introduction of who the characters became. I really like it. Oh! And I also like how Ade likes Ceara. That's cute. Is this the end? Oh, but I can't wait until it's continued! I hope you write the sequel soon! And by the way, I totally loved this story. If it wasn't already on my favorites, I'd add it again. :D Fantastic job on this! Your writing is great!

I really liked the lullabies. They were pretty. :) She won't have a daughter? That's the only way Katharine will regain all of her strength right? I hope that dragon is wrong...There's going to be a sequel? YAY! :D I can't wait! I want to see how this story will end! Awesome chapter! And update as soon as you can!

Wow! They had kids and everything! And I'm glad Ilona got to marry Brennin. :) That's wonderful. This story has come a long way! Great job!

OH MY GOSH! She died! (well...almost) And Goldflame died for her...she was a good friend to her though. It's tradgic -what could've happened to Katharine- but it just doesn't seem like the end and I'm so glad it's not! What a wonderful chapter! I am so impressed with this story. It's fantastic!

They're married! YAY! :D I loved the wedding scene and oh, Ilona is back! Great! I love this-adding Brennin into the picture. They clearly like each other. If only she could get out of marrying Sir Devyn! I hope she comes up with something but anyway, awesome chapter. I wonder what's going to happen next. Can't wait!

I totally loved this chapter! It's so wonderful that they will be married soon! SO EXCITING! I liked how this chapter was more personal with the characters and shared more of their deeper thoughts and feelings. It makes it more believable. :) So far so good! Keep it up!

That's so romantic! :) Finding each other in the rain and then Lance calmed her fears. Oh I just love it! That was an interesting "vision" Katharine had in the beginning. I liked how the chapter ended though. :D They're going to be married sooner!