This was so so good! I loved how you stayed true to the story at every turn. Amazing! ️

I like the depth of character you gave Jackson. Nice story.

Whoaaaa

I like the length of this chapter. I like Lisa's POV. I like that Lisa manage to warn Cynthia. I like that Lisa/Jackson scene. I like how Lisa fought Alexis i her own way. I like how quick thinking Lisa is. I like that Lisa went back to Jackson but he wasn't there. I can't wait to read Jackson's POV. I like that Jackson was confused why Lisa didn't go. I like that Alexis is jealous of Lisa. I like that Lisa saw an opportunity and took it. I really enjoyed Lisa in this chapter, showing how badass she is. I really enjoyed the shoe distraction as well as the heel in the thigh scene. I enjoyed it. Great work.

Bum bum bummmm! Go Lisa being all awesome like we know she is! I like how you mirrored what happened between Lisa and Jackson in the movie to be between Lisa and Alexis. Definitely leaves more to happen with all the characters. I can’t wait to find out where Jackson went (did he somehow escape? Did they take him away? Inquiring minds want to know!) so I hope you update soon!

I love it. I love the Alexis/Jackson scenes. I like the cliffhanger you left it on. I like that Jackson is hurting Alexis and knows he is gonna die. I like that Lisa stayed behind to stop the keefe assassination. I like that Lisa got the others out. I know it has been over a year since you last update. But I'm hoping you haven't lost interest. because I can't wait to read what happens next. well done.

I like it. I like the cliffhanger you left it. (even thought I doubt that Lisa is dead). I like that Lisa stab that Guy with the pen. I like the Jackson/Lisa kissing scenes. I like that Jackson have Lisa the pen. I like that Jackson had a plan but failed. I like that Alexis caught him. well done.

I like the cliffhanger. I like that Lisa was hurt by Jackson. I like that Lisa was crying. I like that Jackson kissed her. well done.

I really enjoyed the Alexis/Jackson scenes. I like how evil and a bitch Alexis is towards Jackson. I like that Jackson still wants her. I like that Alexis knows Jackson has a thing for Lisa. well done.

I like it. I like that we got to learn more about Jackson's history. especially his mom and his ex betraying him. I like that Jackson has scars and that Lisa/Jackson had a moment. I like that Jackson let her touch his scar. well done.

I like it. I like the Jackson/Lisa plane moment. I like that Jackson took the pen from Lisa. I like that Jackson said that he would come back for Lisa. I like that Jackson ex come into the fold. well done

yeah I love that Lisa fought back. I like Jackson tried to come to her rescue. I like that Lisa opened up to him again. well done

I like it. I like how quick thinking Jackson was in making out he had sex with Lisa. I like that Jackson knows what happen to Lisa. I like that Lisa fainted. I really enjoyed the Lisa/Jackson interactions. I like the cliffhanger you left it on. well done.

I like it. I like that their was that scene from canon in it. I like that Jackson expect Lisa for cuts. I like that Lisa attack Jackson. I like that Jackson saw his demon reflection. well done.

I love that Lisa vomited on the Russian hijacker, I am still smiling. I like the different POV's between Lisa and Jackson. I like that they threw Jackson into the toilet with Lisa. I really enjoyed this chapter. well done.