I have had my shares of story that I have had red, but this one has to be the saddest one that I have red. It was good that you got to keep the whole gang together even included Tristan at the beginning. And having Tristan dying for his country was honorably. Finn having liver cancer that was really expected since he drank his brains off during Yale years. Truly a good story! Keep on writing!

A lovely story! Glad I found it.

I liked this story.

Oh wow.

Had me in tears

wow i cant believe he died i was basically crying really that was so sad but i loved that sha said finn as her first word and that jill got a girl and paris actually laughs shocker right. but seriously that was really great your an awsome writer gods gift right you should write another lit you really should loved it totally! as we all say when we come to a conclusion... Fin!

I wasn't sure if Finn was going to die or not. It was a brilliant story, sad but

cute.

very sweet!

i'm almost done with your chapter. the only thing i have to say is the timeline is a bit confusing. it's been 4 yrs since the proposal and their daughter is 1.5 yrs old and was born a year after the marrige, so their engagment was a year and a half, right? that all makes sense, but but allie should be 14 b/c it's been 4 yrs and he was ten at the proposal. the proplosal was a year after being together, so hat makes it not right.b/c finn only had 4 yrs with the twins, so that timeline is fine, but they hadn't been together for a year by the time the twins were born. see what i'm saying?

This was an amazing ending, if not a little sad...

I'm gonna miss it.

great ending to the story! i absolutely loved it! it was rather sad that finn died though!

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Aww I love this story. It's very well written and has a lot of emotion in it. Great ending~

Ahh that was good, beautiful and sad.

Good that Logan and Rory had a girl. I didn't want him to not be a father.

I'm looking forward to read more fics from you.