The dynamic is confusing. it's hard to tell whose child belongs to whom, and which siblings are brothers/sisters and which are cousins or best friends. I would say work on distinguishing characters with similar names and multiple sibling pairs. it'll make for an easy read for readers.

My only complaint is their names. I don't understand them and why for the most part, they all seem to start with the letter L and is spelt so unusually.

Hi there! I realize that this story is likely to never be completed, but I thought I'd go ahead and let you know how sincerely I enjoyed what you did write. Reading the description, I was instantly intrigued, but I never thought it could be pulled off. And then somehow you didn't just pull it off, but you created a truly fantastic story with true development and growth and I loved every second of it. Of course I'm sad to not have the whole story, but thanks for what you did give us, and I hope everything worked out at home for you.

Wow, I totally loved this story! It's brilliant. I really hope that you come back and finish it off, I'm desperate to know what happens next!

I am now, officially, way too intrigued. this is great...

Oh Boy Lois and Clark Stuck

up in moives just like Tobby

Maguire and Resse Whiterspoon

(I think) I love the twist of

this story you took that

concept and totally made it your

own. Yes I fugred out what happened

a bit earlier before you revealed

to us that they were in the future

and all but the story was/is still

nice and I am looking forward to

seeing the completion of this story.

When are you going to update this and

all. Can Lois and Clark's next movie

be either a Superman Movie Or Mortal

Kombat or maybe even both. It should

be fitting and all. After all the latest

Mortal Kombat game is Mortal Kombat VS

DC Universe and Superman is in it so

it could be done that way. Also I am sure

that Superman must be famous in the Clark

gets the idea of the flights and tights

concept after all that is also one of

the things that the kids are planning on.

Will we find out who was talking to Lex Luthor

and will we find out how Clark and Lois

really died and how it was whose fault

exactly.

Oh and before I end this review I would really

like to ask you if you do know that Superman

is part of the DC Universe and that SPIDER-MAN

IS PART OF THE MARVEL UNIVERSE. Therefore

technically speaking these people shouldn't be

really aware of stuff like that. Now keep up

the good work and all and update soon and fast

GREAT, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Interesting chapters. I am curious to see what happens next.

OMG... COME ON UPDATE ALREADY! It's been awhile, you absolutely NEED to hurry up with this one! Thank god there's so much good fan fiction on this site, or I'd go crazy waiting for the update on yours!

Sorry I haven't read this chapter sooner... I just got started with the fall semester, and things are pretty hectic lately...

Really good chapter, I love how you're infusing the SV characters with the ones from the other movies... It's really good, and I can't wait to read more!

Lois... as BABY? Seriously? It's so ridiculous... and yet so utterly fitting. With the way they left the last movie, Dirty Dancing is maybe the only movie on earth that could get them back to a place they should be.

Stupid, stupid, STUPID Lois. She and Chloe are both so similar- stubborn and curious and peppy and... you know. You know how similar they are. But Lois just doesn't see that she has that extra little something, that extra little zing that differentiates her from her cousin. That tiny gap between them is what makes Clark love her... That extra something makes her someone he can love as his soul mate, not just as a friend. (Although of course, she is that to him, too)

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The triplets are seriously messed up, and yet at the same time, they're true heroes. They're not like their father, they've lost their idealism. But they're still working to save people they'll never even know, yet at the same time they DO know, but in a different way. Wow. I think I've got this figured out. I know what the final puzzle is supposed to look like.

There's just one piece missing- what the hell happened? What combination of Leyna's recklessness and Lysandra's stupidity spun off each other to send an entire universe into a death spiral? What was that final trigger. I mean, I know it had something to do with kryptonite obviously, but beyond that...

And also... Julian Luthor appears. Finally. He holds some part of the puzzle, I'm sure. He's the key, somehow, isn't he? Or am I just crazy and that wasn't what you intended at all?

Thank you for updating! Your story is still one im looking forward to reading! Good luck with college, and update when you can

Ooh, Lysandra's probably got more issues than Leyna, from the sounds of it.

So, Lysandra is analogous to her father, as is Leyna- friends who've become adversaries. That sucks. Whatever happened to 'learn from our mistakes'?

Fantastic chapter, again I'm unable to find a flaw.