| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Phoenix Flames |
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N. A. Wennerholm chapter 4 . 6/15/2019 Its stuff like this is why I am against teenage dating too young and immature. Only adults of 20 and over should date once their hormones are leveling out and of age to start finding their marriage mates but not before. |
Bronze chapter 8 . 6/3/2019 I can only assume that you have trouble spelling from the way you've written this story. Now I don't mean that as a flame. I fully admit I can't spell very well either. However, I've found from my own experience of writing that I've improved. So, either get yourself a small portable dictionary or an online spellchecker for your computer. I had the first but it broke and was too expensive to replace at the time. Now I use Grammarly boy does it help! Though, it does have problems with words that most dictionaries don't know. That means made-up names. |
Bronze chapter 2 . 6/2/2019 Whether or not Logan got his claws before or after his Adamantium coated bones really doesn't matter. This is your fic so if you want his Adamantium claws to be part of his mutation then so be it! Your story, your way! |
PGHammer chapter 14 . 11/14/2018 Comics-verse AND movie-verse - and it's not HIM being Cleopatran on the issue (Jean and Logan). |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 10/10/2018 A great story here so far! I look forward to reading more! |
Bronze chapter 14 . 8/18/2018 I know from the comics, when I collected them, that Jean and Logan most times seem very good friends. They use to show Logan was carrying a torch for Jean. This was an interesting story but I wonder if it will continue. According to the last update it's been 6 yrs. Though I have been surprised to see fics that started in the early 2000's and were update last year. So anything is possible. So if this updates maybe I'll be back to read it. |
Bronze chapter 9 . 8/16/2018 I'm rather doubtful that English is your first language. Either that or your spelling is worse then mine! But then I have a very good reason for it. I suffered from dyslexia as a child. Of course I trained myself to read properly when I went to a boarding school with absolutely nothing to do! No athletic fields to play on and we had to stay off the lawns. So I learned to read properly out of boredom. It worked! I now read at the college level but still spell around third grade level. Go figure! |
Bronze chapter 6 . 8/16/2018 Sorry Charlie, you've been gone a long time! |
Dennis Wayne Daugherty chapter 14 . 6/23/2018 Please update soon i love this story please updates |
Wika0304 chapter 14 . 4/8/2018 please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 Good |
Bronze chapter 2 . 6/27/2017 Well, anyone who states the Logan never had claws before metal bonding his bone isn't either well read or a true fan. Now Harry being a mutant similar to Logan doesn't mean he has to follow Logan 's lead as far as the claws go. There's no reason his can't be metal right from the start. Now if he also has the power of the Phoenix also, then he's going to be someone not to piss off! |
Bronze chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 With all the shit Harry has been through at Hogwash I don't understand why he calls it home. Yeah, Durskaban isn't any better either. But then what else do you expect from a braindead old goat molesting sheep shagging senile old fool who believes he knows what's good for the entire magical world? So I really don't understand how Harry could possibly consider that place home! |
WhiteElfElder chapter 14 . 10/15/2016 Can't wait for Hermione and Harmony to run into one another. I think Kitty has a crush on Harry, and that is sad because she would be good for him. Logan-Jean-Scott Harry-Hermione-Ron. |
WhiteElfElder chapter 7 . 10/15/2016 Of course Harry had to run into another Malfoy, one that his family would not accept but still holds to the family beliefs. |