aw, so sweet

Ah. i decided to review again anyways. SO, I think this chapter might need some more structuring. It's not that it's bad, it just seems a little incomplete. I think the meaning got lost somewhere... Had it been slightly longer, I think the point would have been more clear (unless there was just one point - it just seemed like there was another...)

HOWEVER...I'm drooling in a puddle of melted skin from the last line... (squish) Until next upload, (eat those cookies slowly)

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is yawning

OH...MY...GOD. If not for the fact that I'm in Colorado and thus not in my zone, I'd prolly give you a review for each of your drabbles... (contemplates) Well, this is the most IC Fai retrospect I've ever read. It was short, sweet, made its point, and it wasn't a completely sap-and-angst-ridden Fai. (smiles)

Wonderful chapter. I look forward to more on ff from you (which you had better or I will track you down on LJ and drag you over and tie you up in a chair and cover your mouth with tape until you do upload!) (giggles) Cookies for you.

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is yawning

promising. please post more!

short one but... yay beautiful T_T

OMG, yeah, i wonder what will they doing in the end ""

Anyway it was really good

Ok-We! So CUTE! I'm adding the strand to faves and alerts! I can't WAIT for the next drabble! Not a big fan on SxS, BTW... Cute, but it's not like I need to know what's oging on in their unbalanced hormonal stage of puberty. Just to let you know.

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is hypervenilating! (has brown paper bag)

aw, so sweet!

O.o wow. a drabble only has 100 words...? Hmm. okay. *sad* i wanted more~~ but I guess it's okay. it twas very very sweet

I love this drabble! Awesome job, you should be really proud!

Hi.

I thought that was beautiful!

Short, simple and clean ;)

I really enjoyed it

Write more soon!

Nice drabble! I loved that last line! Please add more :)