Another great story. It's amazing how well you have the characters down.

Nice character study. I'm glad you didn't have them moving too fast and immediately into sex - it wouldn't have fit with the tone of the story.

I really liked this!

I really like your story. It was nice and sweet. I can't wait to read more of your stories. That really sounded like Grissom and Sara and everyone else.

that story was amazing...

Great characterization. You know these guys well. The flow of the story was very smooth. I don't know if this is your first fic, but I hope it isn't the last.

wow that was well written and just so beautiful!

This was great. It was so sweet, and so real, not to mention well-written. There wasn't one line that was out of character. I'm impressed! Please keep it up,

-Solomynne.