Intensly freezing... Nicely done D

I am very confused at the last line...

Other then that, a good fic. I wish I knew more of what happened!

Wait... Holy... He's hallucinating. He's actually dying out on the plains, isn't he? Wow.

A really good piece that could use a bit of polishing, but otherwise... great job.

It's a great story, but I'm a bit slow. Are they or are they not at SG headquarters? Does the clenching and dread of O'Neill's gut mean he is still hallucinating and what's the significance of the "icy-white cloud" that Daniel's breathing? Sorry!

Wow - that was pretty much - wow.

Nice characterization of Jack & Daniel and the multi-faceted bond between them - friends, commanding officer, etc.

As always, very well written.

Excellent! A lot said with minimum of words. Great angst!

Are you writing again or reposting?

Oh my goodness... that is so scary/weird. Jack's still on the planet and there both toast- in a manor of speaking. Warm freazing. Really good!(in a creepy way)

Yours,

Delia Ra'Nar

How creepy! Good writing.