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OH YES THEY WILL! :3

Love the story by the way. You have good writing skillage. 0 Thank you for writing this.

Kay thanks,

~ iloveme264 3

Great story, though I was very confused at first. I didn't read or know there was a manga for it. O.O Question! will you be writing more for this anime/manga? O.O I love how this was written, the plot was great and I hope to be able to read more.

this was really good!

despite being mildly AU...

hey, are you going to do another long (wow, can't believe I'm calling this long... most fandoms I think of long as topping 300,0 words...) Earthian fic? there aren't many at all, let alone many above 10,0 or even 5,0 words...

Oh my God! It's fantastic! It's absolutely THE best Earthian fanfic I have ever read, you kept to the characters personalities so well. Even the characters I never really paid any mind to in the manga! I love the manga, and I was always sad that those two idiots never got anywhere, even though anyone could tell what was on their minds. I'm so happy, because now I know what happened to them! If Yun Kouga wrote a sequel to Earthian, or a little after-manga-treat, I bet it would be exacly like your fanfic! Because you kept Kouga's style so well! ...I had to take a break reading it though, I was in DIRE need of a... cold drink, shall we say. *whistles* You kept it tasteful too, none of that overly smutty garbage that people crank out. As a dedicated yuri and yaoi fan, I salute you for this highly satisfying fanfic (that caused me to loose my composure and jump around infront of the computer like a little girl, sqealing.)and, if I had the option of rating it, I would absolutely give it a 10/10!

Domo-arigato Sensei! n_n

Wow finally finished reading this. It was good. Very good, too bad it wasn't longer.

yay! finally a decient piece of Earthian writting! I read the manga too,oh...I've wanted to write one based on the manga for a long time but havn't had the courage to do so since I heard that Tokyopop got rights to it. Your fic has reniewed my motovation. Thank you in so manny ways! So now if your wrong due to a bad translation, at least it won't be you alone. As for the other stuff- beutifull interps of the characters, and equaly beutiful writing. Please feel free to contact me at any time to disscuss your writing!-

Your story is horribly stupendous! I can only say one thing: please, please make a sequel!
One of your now faithful reviewers,
Your Evil Angelic Elven Lord and Master,
Saihitei Youko Seishuku

First of all, thank you for acknowledging inconsistencies with the series. Though it would be interesting how you would have redone this to fit canon.
Your angels are a resolute bunch, aren't they, restarting the investigations? Not that I could not see it happening. I'm sure the destruction of my attack satellite wouldn't faze me in my judgment. Though that could be plausible reason to up the negative point count by quite a bit.
I like your style of writing, with that flow that seems almost lyrical at times. (Dancing on Sword's Edge is far better regarding this.) However, chapter 13 (Denouement) breaks this continuity in your writing. The dialogue with Uriel and Gabrielle seems a little too I'm-getting-tired-so-let's-wrap-this-up-quickly-and-conveniently for me and it seems like there is more to their scheme than what they revealed. Not to mention, their explanation seemed a mere overview to everything they had planned. Don't be afraid of making your chapters longer if you have to.
I am aware that this is the last in a line of revisions you have made to this fanfic. I merely wished to point out a few things for you.

Okay, I only read to chapter 4 but I had to make a post becuase I"m am getting so irritated. I deepy apologize for this unprofessional manor of which i speak and act as of now but I need to say something. Number one, You have your plots connected to whats given in the manga and series correct but overall your characters are way out of it. Not often are the personalities captured so thats not my complaint its the physical look of the characters. You had some issues in your prologe that really through me off and then it changed in chapters 1-2 but in 3-4 it went back to your mistakes. First off since when was Raphael's hair sea green? And Michael doesn't have blonde hair, sometimes you say Raphael's hair color is blonde then its sea-green, and allow me to butt in my my statement but if I have to hear tha tword on emore time I am going to freak out. Your form of presentation is beautiful and professional but need i suggest a thesarus becuase you cannot use these words over and over and over and over and over again. Your story would be nice if you took this into consideration. But have you even seen the show? Because right now I have my doubts, sadly. I meant no harm by this reveiw but I'm getting so agravated that I had to make it.

Wah! Please write more soon! I love Raphael/Mika-chan fics and I want more! It's so good!

Okay, maybe that wasn't constructive crtism, but... I like it, really

jules

)..) oj, the tension is unbearable!

write more write more!

*glomps*

MOOOOOOOOOORE!~

I'm in love with this story! I hope you post more soon!

Ahhh! Finish! Fin-ishhhh *Please?* *teary chibi puppy eyes*