Reviews for Taking Control
Amber Serpent chapter 3 . 6/30
Everything Harry's purchased is quite expensive. Did you know that a Galleon is $5?
Guest chapter 22 . 6/24
FUCKING AUTHORS AND THEIR NEED - YES YOUR NEED - TO DO THE SHIT TRAIN THAT IS HARRY AND CHO.

THAT SLUT BITCH SHOULD BE FLAYED.
SlytherinsFerret chapter 18 . 6/20
I figured it out at the first mention of Fawkes. I mean, it makes sense. He healed Harry’s basilisk wound, so why wouldn’t it work with that too?
Guest chapter 16 . 6/19
WHAT THE FUCK? dumbledork was in love with Grindewald and that is the reason he could NOT KILL him!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/19
strapless dresses are not appropriate for teenagers!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/18
weather in northern Scotland in December (must be December because of the LAST HOGSMEADE VISIT BEFORE THE HOLIDAYS) is around 40 degrees - NOT COOL THATS DOWN RIGHT COLD!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/17
someone needs to report granger to Mcgonnagal for harrassment of students - harassing Harry especially!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/14
ron is such a bastard...too bad the Weasley family won't disown him for being such a stupid cretin
Guest chapter 10 . 6/13
DUH! dumbledork uses the portraits to tell him when someone opens the door to the rotating staircase!

ron is a vindictive bastard. I don't see why Harry kept being friends with him!

granger forgetting about Harry being banned from quidditch and his broom confiscated is NOT a true friend! damn bitch

fucking shit ron is a bastard if he thinks a quick apology will make things right with Harry!

and I bet you let Malfoy off with a slap on the wrist! he should be serving detention till he graduates and banned from quidditch!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/12
in Harry's 6th year dumbledork would be about 115 - 117 years! JSYK
Guest chapter 8 . 6/10
FUCKING SHIT HARRY DOES NOT NEED TO FORGIVE EVERYONE SO EASILY!

if granger thinks the chang bitch is lovely, why doesn't she ask her to the ball? doesn't the BITCH remember Harry telling her that he has NO interest in nosepiece chang?

granger needs to be permanatley obligated!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/9
FAIL!

you should have had Harry give Ron detention right then and there!

O F F S
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9
just so you know - snow owls are diurnal ! because they live in the arctic they hunt during the day!

so glad I can prove granger wrong - AGAIN!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/8
someone please permanently silence granger!

why can't you perform magic on the train? if you are not supposed to then there would be magic sensors to notify the conductor (whose bright idea is it to have ALL those kids on a train for hours without adult supervision?)

the library is on the 1st floor uk (2nd floor US)

don't you mean Kyle is reserve KEEPER?

O F F S
Guest chapter 4 . 6/7
WHAT PARENTS ACTUALLY SIGN THEIR LETTER TO THEIR SON WITH THEIR PROPER NAME?

THEY WOULD SIGN IT 'MUM' AND 'DAD'

ron is such a stupid Ber (oh for fucks sake) assistant professor?

here is hoping we don't see Jessica again!
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