That was all just so cute and perfectly played out ... UGH! WHY CAN'T THIS REALLY HAPPEN? I mean really, why do they make us wait soo long? It's not like they're not going to eventually {if they don't i WILL hurt them} :) I mean you can write it, we can read it, why don't thy get a cule and make it happen? Whatever, i'll wait. Keep up the good work.

very good it brightened up my day

Great Story! Very well written :o)

whow! great fic. rather upsetting reading about what happened to him in the war, but it made it all better reading the way they love each other in their love making. really sweet ending, he knows how scared she is of loving someone but he told her and she asked him to stay.

very sweet, fluffy excellent work

cute almost exactly how i would imagine her reacting this was very well put together not too long and not to short and not overrated it had the right amount of everything

YAY pretty chappie me likes it way muchos :D on to the next chapter

nice way to end the chappie very interesting story indeed

That was so sweet and cute.

Booth was so open with her... And although Tempe didn't say it back, she took a huge leep with him.

You wrote this short story beautifully. Thank you.

Lisa :)

That was HOTT!

Wow... You just made it to my favourite author's list.

Lisa :)

PS: I love the real facts you put into the story about the torture. It gives the story more credibility and seems more like the show.

This story is very descriptive. I feel like it's raining outside (but it's the middle of summer in Australian - Very hot!)... So well done! You sucked me into your story.

I love the way Temperance has picked up on Booth's need )to talk). ANd the way she caught the 'looks' in his eyes... nice.

Lisa :)

very sweet:)

This is a really good fic. I love this chapter. It has to be the best love scene I've ever read, very romantic, not over-the-top! Great job!

~Tied

Great Start!

Love it I loved the last line about how he didn't need 2 hear it he just knew soo sweet cute romantic!

Bravo!