wow... that was actually really good. you really did capture the different versions of love. can't wait to read your other stories!

... You made me cry... I hate you .

But OK, it was a great fic. You have a very nice narrative.

Emerin-sempai, you capture longing and heartache better than any person I know. Its nuts! And I love you for it! *hugs Dee*

Ahh, pretty! The first few comparisons were well thought out and beautifully written. The emotions were realistic and captivting. Nicely done! )

Very pretty, I really like how you described love in the first part, sounded so accurate and real. Great job!-

WOW! THAT WAS SO DEEP MY FRIEND! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! THERE IS SO MUCH EMOTION IN THIS STORY! I GOT TEARS IN MY EYES! KEEP THE AWESOME WORK! THIS IS GOING UNDER MY FAVORITES!