I loved this story. But I did thank it was a little sad and happy all at the the same time, I was crying at the end.

I liked the story, it was sad and happy, I cryed no I did. Bit like I said, it was a happy and sad story

First time reading this, and so far I really like it, and don't thank they had kind of feelings, but who knows, they could have felt something. So like this story so far.

That is so sad!I was crying almost an hour! Why did it have to end like that?!

*cries*

Very awesome. I love it. Thanks and kiss
A.

I'm going to say this once, Cross seems to be line Allen' odd and overprotective father.

poor Allen, every one's against him

awwww

xYASSS

well that just happened

The ending was a Good ending,but you know not the one I wanted but so oddly satisfing,your writing is beautiful. I never really write reviews but this made me cry,so much I just /Had/ Keep up the good work -Queenie

I hate it. Uwaaaaaa
Why did they have to be separated from their child?
Just kill those stupid commanders n pick new ones.

*gets shot in the feels* mmmmm whacha saaaaaaaay...

Snif.
Ah ha no why! Poor Allen and kanda! They had to give up their little Lucy again! I really got me when she called allen 'Uncle allen'
(Crying in corner going "why! Poor Allen and kanda waaa!)
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An hour later. OK now that that's out of my system I want to say that you guys totally rock! I love this fan fic so much! You guys totally rule!
P.S. I also read the sequel to this stoy, I almost started to cry again. (Poor kanda, Lucy got mad at him.) I liked the way you guys showed the battle scenes! You should write another one continuing after the sequel.
I love the way you guys write and loved the idea for this story.