Freaking incredible story :D especially when Harry was the masked man! I made him more sexy xD

"touch her again you BOUNCING FERRET" "Harry was jumping around, mouthing, 'yes! yes! yes!' Incidentally, so was Draco" Two of my favorite quotes from this chapter! Really great story!

Dear Shameful Writer,

This isn't a Hermione fic. It's an Azadeh/or whoever the hell you created. List it as OC, and be done with it - don't mess with Hermione's character because you're too lazy to create a background for this shitty character you've invented. Because Hermione is HERMIONE GRANGER. This ISN'T Hermione's story. I grant that this is fanfiction, but at least have some respect for J.K's writing. Don't slander her characters in such atrocious ways. Stories like yours is what makes me lose faith within the fanfiction world. Get your act together please.

Sincerely,

A concerned reader of the HP fanfic world.

P.S In addition, your writing is ghastly.

How the f**k is this Harry and Hermione?

omg harrry! wth is h doing with voldy?

I find amazing your ability to ignore things just from seeing your profile. This story is shit. Mary sue, pitiful grammar, pathetic plot. I hope your're a girl, because if not, I'll feel even more disgusted. By the way, Lucius/Hermione? Yes I am sure that if you were a black girl, you would love to be with a KKK member while he insults you and abuse you right? Go fucking kill yourself. I took the time to read more than this and I can honestly say that your stories are shit. FAIL

YAY I KNEW IT! I guessed "the chosen" was Harry the whole time through to be honest I figured it because I insterted one to make "the chosen one" H arry was called it in 6th im pretty sure

I just finished this story, and it is amazing! I love how you add other magical creatures to the wizarding world. I have read "Conk" also and loved it too. Your stories flow very well and there is never a dull moment. You have done a wonderful job. thank you for all your hard work and imagination. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! 2 thumbs up!

This is one of the best and most realistic stories that i have read on this site. There wasn't any part of it that i thought was impossible. I spent a whole day just sitting here reading and I am now wishing that Azadeh was a part of the HP universe. Your spelling could use a little editing (which I would love to do for anything you write, not to be presumptous) as could your sentence structure in a few places but I do believe that you have made me grow up a little bit just by letting me read this story. You have a real gift and I hope to read more of your work in the future.

lol i usually do not care to give reviews but i thought that story was very good, not to emotional yet it still had emotions, perfect xD

I finally finished, after about a week, and i gotta say im kinda sad its over! This was a great story, im going to check out your profile now and check out some of your other stories!

Well done, seriously loved it!

Wow! Words cannot describe how much i loved this story!

It took me two whole days to get it all in, and just...WOW!

The storyline is so original, and its all so descriptive which is a hard thing to find in a story these days. This story kept me literally on the edge of my seat, i was up until 2am this morning and only stopped reading because i could barely keep my eyes open. This is now one of my fave fan fic stories ever! Thank-you so much for writing it!

KUDOS!

Very nice ending... A wonderful story.

i liked this story a lot it kept me wanting to see what was going to happen ... this wasn't at all what i thought it was ganna be...

This story deserves THOUSANDS of reviews. Bravo.

Bravo.