This is stunning. Wow. I can't even pick a favorite part, or line, because it all just works so well together as a cohesive whole, as a single picture of Sam and his brother. Beautiful work, thank you for sharing!

Your writing blows me away. It's SO GOOD! This was an amazing story. Just fantastic. The ending scene tore my emotions apart!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. There's nothing else to say. You've just captured the essence of it perfectly.

This was really good. I especially like the section about Dean taking the bed closest to the door.

Beautiful story. Broken Winchesters.

That was excellent! Loved how you wrote the relationship between the brothers, especially with the t-shirt thing, and also the Devil's Trap bit was brilliantly done.

I'm crying now. Dean just breaks my heart.

Wow, this was beautifully written. I love your insight into the characters. Very well done.

Still entranced by your beautiful tale. Can't wait to see how the hell they get to hell. LOL.

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Very well written, but it seems like you changed focus right in the middle of it. I was worried about Sam after the jinjin got him( And really,what's with the "saving Sam's sorry arse" thing? I think they're both saving each other,with Dean ahead, but - Sam's arse is SO not sorry. )Then-WHAM-into Devil's expound on the original plot. I want to know what happens after they reach the car. Thanks, and please update soon.

Perfect, darling.