Loved the story. I'm a sucker for tragic tales with happy endings, call me sappy or cliche XD

The whole family-like Organisation thing doesn't really feel right to me thanks to how they are in all the games (stabbing each other in the back and always competing to rise over the others), but I guess it sorta makes sense since you gave them back hearts to feel again...

I feel bad for Riku, he was so into Kairi (no matter how guilty he felt or thought he was betraying his best friend) and Kairi sorta just uses him for comfort and then goes back to Sora in the end leaving him back at square one. It seems he's happy because he's doing it for his friends, and everyone can see Kairi and Sora belong together but... I feel like Riku needs a proper pairing in the sequel! Maybe Xion could return?

Anyway, loved the story.

I see the reminder that this is a Sora x Kairi story but I'm having trouble seeing how they'll salvage the scrap metal that was their relationship, let alone their friendship... But would you call me sadistic or a downer for loving this story so far?

Okay, I'm gonna be blunt and say there wasn't much that I liked in this fic so far. It suffers the same kind of problems most CW dramas seem to share (lack of tact/understanding, characters being self absorbed to the nth degree, etc.), but above all of that is the dialogue. It's flat, lacking that charm or humor the original series has in spades. Characterization is played on thick, and while the argument could be made that this could work for certain characters, it just doesn't mesh well.
Also, I've heard enough defense of the Organization and their plight for one day, to boot.
I know I'm going in circles with this bit as it's going into selfishness, but I've got to get it off my chest.
WHY WON'T ANYONE ACKNOWLEDGE THAT IT'S A MATTER OF MORALS WHETHER SORA STAYS OR LEAVES?
You can't just send someone else to risk their life with a world savior on your team. It's just stupid!
overall, I simply feel that this world simply fails to understand the heart of the series and is far too angsty for a series meshed with Disney.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH You EVEN HAD ME CRYING AT THE END YOU HAVE DONE THE Best Jobs I COULD THINK Of:‚) I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND YOU ARE THE BEST, I AM Even CRYING RIGHT NOW THANK YOU!

I really liked and enjoyed this story. Awesome job!

This is how I always viewed the Organization: A dysfunctional family, hell-bent on getting hearts and manipulating each other, but a family none-the-less. Great job.

Oh meh gawd O.O

I dont know why i waited until this last chapter to reveiw, but i have to say. This is quite possibly one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. You incorprate incredible ideas, mainly original, give us taste of extreme inner conflict, feed us angst like its a turky feast, lit fires of emotion into my heart, and gave us an amazing plot, that when we thought couldnt get worse, definately. got. worse. I give you my major respect, as your story is quite frankly the first ive ever read to actually make me shed a few tears, at how much emotion it poured into me just from reading it the first time through. Sora's death was soooo sad. Ive never seen a writer who could express so much EMOTION into a story. Who are an amazing writer, and i give you my respect.

-Sincerely RainzOfRage

YOU FUCKING KILLED NAMINE OFF I AM GONNA KILL YOU SHE IS MY FAV CHARACTER AND YOU KILLED HER DO NOT WORRY CUZ I SHALL HELP ROXAS KILL SORA NO MATTER HOW MUCH I LIKE HIM I WILL GET REVENGE!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHA!

lenne was already a summoner she just also was a singer stupid get your facts straight (no ofense just get kinda pissed : its my second favorite game anyway KH being the first) love it

Right. So.

I've left three review in a row now, but time for the full on judgment.

In terms of execution: brilliant. Characters are spot on, reactions are logical, you've done a wonderful job weaving a story. I particularly liked the part where Sora goes completely psycho. Was fun to read. Would have liked to see him in a badass longcoat and body armor as a Heartless General or something.

Less brilliant things:

1. Kairi was a bit weepy. And by that I mean that she seemed to break into tears once every chapter, which felt mildly excessive.

2. Sora and Roxas. I mentioned earlier that I think you should've either killed one or the other and then left them dead. Also, Sora's antagonism seems... farfetched? What I mean is, it's entirely understandable for him to be very very angry, but what we see here is something greatly resembling a permanent shattering of the relationship between Sora and King Mickey, which seems kind of excessive. I also much preferred the idea of OrgXIII(I) being redeemed, but that's not really much of an issue, I suppose.

3. King Mickey's offering of his crown also seems slightly out of character, but I'm not sure how you'd resolve that, so eh.

So, long paragraph of criticism is long, but it's really only a small part of the story (chapters 33 and 34, mostly), and the rest of it was amazing. There's not much to say about the good stuff except that it was good. Sora's decent was particularly well done. otherwise, I'm done with the soapbox. Good work!

Blaaaaaaaaaaaaah disregard my previous review. I have to say though, this is feeling a little deus-ex-machina. I would argue that you shoulda killed Roxas and left him dead, or killed Sora and left HIM dead.

If I was a flamer, I'd flip shit about you making Roxas sacrifice himself for you ship, but I'm not a flamer. That being said, I do NOT agree with Roxas sacrificing himself. Plotwise, I think it would have been more sensical (that's not a word I know) for Roxas to stay "alive". Kairi gets progressively more accepting of Roxas, so I think it would have been better for the story and for the characters for Kairi to have blocked (somehow) Roxas' blow. Desperation, perhaps? Regardless, just my thoughts.

Sooooooo awesomee! I'm a RokuNami fan to death and when I saw this had SoKai and Larxel I just couln't help but read it! And I do NOT regret it B) lol but I remember I was about to leave when I saw there was NamiKu :$ but I started reading Nobody's Perfect and I read this once again totally loved it! And wow! 616 reviews? You're certainly a MASTER! I'm still laughing from the day Larxy and Nami got drunk :3 and I almost cried when Roxy and Nami fought :'( and when Nami died I DID cry HARD! D': too much to take! And her sacrifice was sooo sweet :'''''( lol but sappy ending lol THE BAD GUYS! B) do you agree with me on Namine should be the Number XIV and NOT Xion? If you want, you could read this new fic I'll post soon, it's about Namine being Number XIV after CoM, like a Days with Nami :) LoVeD the part where they fade together :'3 LOVE YOUR FIC! And btw, I think I don't like Arlene now -_-

Holy crap evil preview. ;_; GAH, I was supposed to be studying for my oral today, but DAMN now I have to read the sequel.

There are some grammar errors in here, mostly stuff like "Kairi and Riku was" and you mix present and past tense a lot. There was also a bit of OOC (from Larxene and Xemnas, mostly) but the story was great! I just couldn't stop reading. I finished this in one day. 8D Yay for fluff?

GAAAAHHHHHH I don't know why, he doesn't even do that much, but EACH TIME DEMYX DOES SOMETHING IT'S LIKE SQUEEAAAAAAAL 3 He's just too adorable.

LOL fricking AWESOME story! Seriously awesome... Best KH fic I've ever come across! Actually made me cry in a few spots... Like when Kairi shattered poor Sora's Heart... Ever seen someone's heart get shattered by one they love? Their expressions and behaviors can be radically different... Such as you portrayed with Sora. In addition, it was not only well written, the plot did not drag on forever, your story keeps your readers on the edge of their seat, and there were no horribly awkward sentences that you find in so many stories. Your grammar wasn't horribly sloppy, but the way the characters spoke wasn't overly formal, either. Also, they were very few mistakes with your punctuation... I'm actually fairly sure that I seen less than ten in the entire story... However, it IS 2 AM where I am currently, but I usually pick up on those types of things even when on the verge of passing out. Your spelling was a lot better than most people's are, I seen few spelling errors but they are there. However, we all misspell things and they were so few words that I was really impressed... If you've read down this far, you're probably wondering why I left you this HUGE review... Well there are a few reasons... 1)Because your story deserves a HUGE review [it was seriously that good]; 2) Because I'm procrastinating on heading to bed [Lame, yes. oh well .]; 3) I haven't written a review in so long.

Yeah, I know my opinion doesn't really matter- hell, if I had a review this lengthy, I'd laugh and show it to my best friend- but knowing that someone really really enjoyed your story makes it all right, right? I'm hoping, at least. Well, I hope my chatter didn't put you to sleep or annoy you.

May your muse never run dry,

Midnight's Queen