Reviews for Movement
droderey chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
ahh gosh wow. I know this is like five years old, and you probably won't read this, but wow. Heartbreaking, and wonderful and... thank you!
Pernille chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Beautiful story.. I think you really captured Pam and Jim! and you are clearly a talented writer!.. just wow..
Chasing Liquor chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Another triumph. You're the master of that limbo between despair and redemption. This is probably my favorite of your pieces thus far, an opinion bolstered by a final line that is painfully simple and yet effervescing with meaning.

"Take me with you."

Perfect ending to a great story.
nomadshan chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Movement, yes! This ends with so many possibilities. Very atmospheric.
TRE chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Oh I really like this b/c you worked in how she left Roy. I hate the assuming part of it that all of that just "disappears".
standing-in-the-doorway chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
oh! i really liked this. especially the part about pam's speculation on fights about milk and puppies and the last line. ahh i cant wait for season 3
OpheliaDrowning chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Very a satisfying ending, but I am a greedy girl, so hurry with the next chapter! :)
Liv chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
This is so beautiful! And a very realistic way that they could eventually be together.

A friend and I just started a community on LiveJournal for The Office fanfiction called theoffice_fic and we would love if you posted there!
lukelorelai chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
aw that was so cute! you can't just leave it like that!
searchingforasoul chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
why are your stories so amazing?
pyrebi chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Hurrah! New story!

I love how you never (or very rarely) use their names. It really gives the feeling that the story is about -them-. ...Er, I'm not sure how that works, but you've got it down to a science, I'd say.

As always, highly enjoyable. It's nice to read a Pam-centered one, because a lot of fics deal almost exclusively with Jim's feelings and motives. Thanks so much for the read!
nothingheretosee0000 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
"It’s easy to watch ten years slip through her fingers, because she’s been doing it for so long." Love this!

Great fic. I always like what you write though, so this is no surprise. :D
Adele chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
One word: Awesome.
christina jean chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
That was just so perfect! I have been cursing for days cause I could see stories that were supposed to be there but couldn't read them. It was totally worth the wait.
jessica chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
wow. that's all i can say. wow.
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