| Reviews for Mysterious Fatal Woman! |
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   New.York.Celt chapter 15 . 3/4/2007 ZORO, YOU IDIOT (whacks Zoro) liked it, loved it, lived it update soon -firefistACE8 |
| MKLlim chapter 13 . 11/29/2006 Wow, your story is very nice. I'm learning French right now (I know about 20 words! haha) and I admire the fact that you actually translated your French version of the story into English! Wasn't it hard? Anyways, the story is really cute and I will be very happy to see more. Very nice drawings by the way. |
| i love athrun chapter 12 . 9/2/2006 IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
| SyncroX chapter 12 . 8/28/2006 Whew...had to seriously think to understand your language. Ha, but it was worth it. Good flashback, good storyline, and on a whole, excellent. I mean, who cares if ur grammar's not perfect? It's the content that's important. Keep this up. I will be really please if you continue to translate your chapters...faster. Anyway, great job ;) |
| Tagath chapter 12 . 8/12/2006 yeah!X3 my favourite chapter! Just the idea of a young Mihawk... *drools* Eyh, why are you reading this? Keep translating, lazy girl!è_é |
| Tagath chapter 11 . 7/14/2006 YEAH!XD best part of the story is coming!XD Did I tell you how much I loved that flash-back? Well, you know it. Anyway, you english seems really good, you know! better that mine...; I didn't remember Zorro was so suspicious about Mihawk... I laughed a lot when I thought there was poison in his glass!X3 (vi, review en anglais... j'veux pas détonner!XD) |
| cheekylips chapter 11 . 7/13/2006 NO! I can't wait until August! But I guess I will have to. Great chapter! |
| Sarkastisk chapter 11 . 7/13/2006 Great chapter! And true, Nuit does fit in to Night... xD well I'm going to start with my own fic, with you and some other authors in it, you know, yea you know :P. Aw... august? my birthday is on the 21:th august _ See ye in ze next chapter! |
| cheekylips chapter 10 . 7/9/2006 Hey sweet! Sorry about not reviewing. My computer broke down lol. Anyway, I love it. Please update soon! |
| Chrosis chapter 10 . 7/8/2006 Nice. The pace of this story has really picked up. |
| Sarkastisk chapter 10 . 7/7/2006 Great chapter, and I didn't really notice any problems here, with the grammar XD I'd like to know if Nuit is dark on french, you should know! Or?... well great chapter as I said before! And I can't wait for the next one! See ye in ze next chapter mate! |
| Chrosis chapter 9 . 7/5/2006 WOOHOO! Nice plot twist! I never expected Mihawk to be here! Keep it up, or I'll flame like you've never seen before in your life. IN YOUR LIFE! |
| i love athrun chapter 9 . 7/4/2006 IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
| Sarkastisk chapter 9 . 6/29/2006 D-damn! I never expected that... but it was damn great! XD Let's see here, any wrong's here? ah! And Zoro was entered. Er... And Zoro had entered. I think that is a better way to say it! XD and another one: The red haired girl seemed anxious. In front of her, Opale was gripped her fist, and seemed very anxious, trembling. ... The red haired girl seemed anxious. In front of her, Opale had gripped her fist, and seemed very anxious, trembling. Your biggest problem is with the 'was'. You use them when it should be had. I havn't really noticed anything else! So keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing! See ye in the next chapter! and mr.2 is watching me dance? cool! *dances a bit then dances away* |
| Sarkastisk chapter 8 . 6/25/2006 yay! *Dances around* another chapter! And the best one for now! XD Well great, just great! See ye in the next chapter! *Dances away* |
