Lol because he's losing control. Thank you!

Hahaha Haruhi is indeed dangerous! Especially for Kyoya. Thanks for a sweet, little story.

Please continue with this story it is amazing.

Love this!

This is an excellently well-put piece of writing! :D

Good one shot. I think you did a good job of capturing Kyoya's personality.

hohoho so it was kyouya who misunderstood Fujioka's meaning in the initial phone call? Regardless, cute story!

Oooh... so kyoya wants to be in control, eh? ;)
Naughty, naughty Kyoya. ;)

He's slippin!

Hah, this was published 6 years ago... But I would just like to say that this is very nicely written. I like the short and simple sentences. It's in character too. Nice job :)

Haha. I wouldn't be surprised if that's how Kyoya actually thinks - I reckon he liked her too. Great job.

Perfect. I love it.

Good use of the present tense. The short sentences and simplicity really work here. It seems dry on the surface but has a lot of feeling beneath it. Great work.

(Don't you love reviews that are five years late?)

-Skye

Nice writing. VERY VERY VERY KYOYA :)

well done! Kyoya is a hard character to write for...and then again maybe not so hard, all you have to do is make sure his emotions don't come out all mushy, and his thoughts calculating and guarded. And I believe you did just that :] i hope to see see more from this story! maybe!

I don't remember if I commented on this story, but this is a great story. Oh, I translated the ending in a very interesting way. When Kyoya says that he doesn't want to friends and to be in control of a very dangerous Haruhi, he wants to be more than friends. He wants to be a boyfriend( maybe the obssesive type).Also, I think that he feels somewhat threatened that he loves Haruhi. (Yah get what I mean?)