Hey, I know it is very well possible that you may never see this comment, but I feel that I owe you something.

Years ago, this story kept me up for days and nights. I was so fascinated with it. Whether it be the action or emotional scenes, you really made me feel something. This was probably the first story to get me interested in writing, SSBB or not. Your dialogues between Captain Falcon, Samus, and Jigglypuff especially evoked emotion out of me that I had not known could arise from fiction, until then.

I just want to thank you for this story. You might never know who I am, and you haven't updated for 3 years, but on the off chance that you somehow stumble across this, you are one of the people who made me a writer.

Thanks for the memories - Will. N

Dear hacktheworld1991,

I've been reading this fanfiction for a few Skype friends for a while now and you asked for my thoughts on the fanfiction.

Why the hell do you have so many characters?! It makes it for me really hard for me to come up with unique voices for them, and so many of them don't even go anywhere!

Yours truly,

BOB JOHNSON

Nothing particularly exciting, the chapter had its moment of intensity near the end, but all in all, just a run of the mill transition chapter; nothing that hurts the story as a whole.

Very well done for improvising the various abilities. Only real thing you should probably take note of is how near the end when Medusa is screaming, right now ff dot net is only displaying three exclamation marks, the website has been editing out words that are terribly long lately.

you should continue this stiry. its really good.

That was touching... and what a plot twist, I didn't expect the appearance at the end of the chapter. Nicely done.

That was short, but ripping with power and passion from the characters involved. Very well done.

Oh yikes... more battles, this does seem to get more and more tense as it goes along. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Pit vs. Medusa was okay, not fantastic but it wasn't bad at all. Now the rescues going on here, nice, I didn't see that coming at all, nicely done.

Augh that's an evil cliffhanger! But still makes the wait all the sweeter when its over. So not bad, a bit short but still a good fight.

Aww, man...You gotta stop with the deadly cliffhangers, Hack. :P

Great story! Your writing drastically improved throughout the story. The power-level thing though...I know it's a way of demonstrating how strong people are, but it sounds way too much like... ... ... IT'S...OVER...NINE THOUSAND! There are still some parts that don't make as much sense...But it's a very good story, good job. )

That was short but nontheless it was incredibly intense. I loved the imagery of the strain Ike put on himself to combat the Dark Knight. So very well done.

*Gasp* Oh noes! Ike! Psh...Great aether...I swear, whenever I'm facing and Ike, cpu or online, I ALWAYS get Great Aether'd. Meh.

Great job! Waiting for the next installment...(Musical note)

Oh boy I am SO looking forward to Ike vs. Dark Knight. Though you have to wonder if Pit, Ness, and Ike will make it out alright, they are facing very powerful opponents and we still don't know the fate of Samus and Fox. Question questions, a good way to leave a chapter off to keep us waiting for more. Well done.