*flails* oh my god that so cute and fluffy. I LOVE IT. *heart eyes, motherfucker*

Cute and beautiful. Great thanks for such a story.

Squee! You seriously cannot imagine just how much I love fluff. I love all things romantic, fluffy or mushy, and this certainly didn't disappoint. It was fluffy, mushy, sweet, romantic and cute. :D :D

Now that was sweet and very original. I enjoyed it.

jo que dulce *_* yo quiero un mamo-chan para mi *_*

Aww! Sweet :) Pure fluff! Please write more :)

Hawaiian-Plumeria

i love this one shot is the first time i read a story line like this

I hope you continue

Okay, so I did what you told me to do; put on some romantic music (Yoko Kanno's 'I Do') and read it.

Let me say this first;

AW! That was simply incredible. Very sweet. Well written, grammar and punctuation is good, and though it's a bit fast paced, it fits well with their aspects.

Yay!

such a cute and short story.

Aw... That has got to be one of the sweetest stories I have ever read. I gotta admit that was adroable and perfectly written.

~Halo Angel~

heh sounds like you were inspired! good going!

would you believe i feel war and fuzzy inside too? iits so cute an fluffy! i feel like a teddy bear inside! D

ah, that was just so sweet! i absolutly loved it, and feeding ducks, who would of thought that as a nice simple romantic date... i love it! keep up the good work!

;D

aww...how sweet!