Well this one had more 'action-y' things in it but it still seemed lacking some how. Any who I am off to check out the next story on your authors page. I thank you for this story and am eagerly awaiting the nest instalment.

I know I'm working backwards but great stories so far. Love all 3 I've read so far

Like the "Chocolate Frosted Sugar Bombs" ref.

Lemme guess, they're GJ's backup team? :D

Dearest reader

I sit here at my computer typing this with so many mixed emotions, first of all the heart-swelling pride in the fact that I once again had the privelege of witnessing such a beautiful moment in the KP Universe that my dear friend Commander Argus shared with you and me. Even after a suspense-filled RIDE described with such action and sense of adventure, we were provided a glimpse into the lives of Kim and Ron that were alluded to by SO MANY great KP FanFic writers, but veritably described by the writer I still consider to be the Penultimate Fundamentalist Writer of the Kim/Ron pairing genre.

I have tears rolling down my cheeks not only from the power of this story, but for the fond rememberances of my buddy Nelson who was tragically taken from us 2 years ago come 12-1-10 by a bicycle accident. I will never in my life forget this man who was always kind, wise, and FUNNY to talk to, even if it was only over a computer chat.

I miss you terribly, Nelson... and I take solace in the fact that I can always visit you in your stories and as I admire your artwork.

I look forward to laughing with you once again in heaven.

Dave

11/22/2010

Another good story in this series. I just get so jazzed about the way that you handle to two of them. This is so much a series about them rather than missions. In many ways I’m a green-eyed duck. If some of these like themes start showing up in my later works, you’ll know where I got the inspiration from.

Poor Kim and her freckles. I just shake my head and grin every time they attack her. And if ‘old married’ bathroom issues are issues to her she’s got some growing up to do. What have they done on missions all those years? I know that Ron puts her comfort and privacy first but still.

The party was too evil; and for me all too real considering how many just like that I’ve broken up over the years. And while I agree that James had every reason to blow (at least he didn’t pop the kids one right in front of a group of cops - saw that happen at least 3-4 times) he did take it too far in my mind, something that you handled very deftly in the subsequent sections.

Several very interesting sections on teen introspection running throughout this installment. Some of it is all too painful to read—which of course makes it all the more realistic.

Anne must have acquired an amazing amount of bodily control from standing in those operating theaters all those years to run like that without leaking.

It’s good to see that they can have a real disagreement and fight. Makes them all the more real. And their moods/reactions was very much in character for the both of them. It would have been nice too see however how they resolved the problem without a kidnapping.

And I certainly hope that the wedding (when it happens) goes better than the proposal did (although it was enjoyable in a masochistic way)

Thoroughly enjoying this as in not getting anything else done.

The Wise Duck

There's only two people 'villians' Ron would be worried about: Monkey Fist, who is still in jail, and the other, well I'm not going to say for some folks read reviews before they read the story but I do know who the other is. You'd have to read Commanders previous fic to now who it is **hint hint**

Great chappy Commander! As for the fight between the lovebirds, I'd have to say I agree with Ron; that is being a little unreasonable(ok maybe more so). And glad to know she realizes that. As for her captor, I know exactly who it is(not just because I read it before)! But there's only one of her enemy's would have a A emblazoned in the center of their uniform whose seeking long lasted revenge!

What were they speaking of that some bystanders would misunderstand?

MORE!

Another great one. So Kim and Ron are finally adults...K on to the next of the series.

Wonderful story!

I loved how that all came together.

Awesome chapter!

Very nice parent/child interaction in this chapter.

i luv this story. it rocks!

but i want to know are you from a arabic contry, because you wrote about Egypt and Kuwiat.

i'm from Egypt, but i live in London.

please write more fantastic romance stories for KP and RS.

thanks

cya

Laura R.

PS: i read all you KP and RS stories, so please write a new story soon, bye!