| Reviews for Safety Rules |
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   Tania-R chapter 1 . 5/19/2006 Funny! Got me on the last line! |
| Laura-trekkie chapter 1 . 5/18/2006 Great Rodney voice. You got the right balance of concern for John and himself, the snark and the payback. Loved John's muttered comment at the end too- all is right with the world if they're both snarking :). |
| SGAFan chapter 1 . 5/17/2006 *giggles* Thats great! You have a very strong and very good McKay voice. Very nice vignette! |
| Alipeeps chapter 1 . 5/16/2006 That was brilliant! Absolutely excellent! Love the whumpage, love the humour, love the action. Your take on McKay's character was brilliant - how like him to be (even internally) complaining about Health & Safety even as he rescues his team-mate. The fic had a wonderful sense of tension and the pacing and layout was inspired. I really enjoyed McKay's POV here, it feels like you really captured his character - your first paragraph just sums him up perfectly. This is going right into my faves. :D |
| Linnzi chapter 1 . 5/16/2006 I loved this! Really amusing and whumpy too. You really nailed McKay's character perfectly. Excellent. I hope you'll write again soon? |
| parisindy chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 hehehe cool |
| sheppardfan chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Very nice. I do have one complaint, though: too short! |
| drufan chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 That was cute! When you said Manual Handling...I'm thinking booklets not a man. Enjoyed that and loved the end. |
| Ellex chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Great hook - you reeled me in, worrying about the boys, and hit me with some very nice humor. |
