| Reviews for Private Emotions |
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simsimi.sto chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 2006! چ افتضاحی... |
BaconDonut123 chapter 5 . 1/8/2016 I so wish this could have happened in the books. |
Bacon Donut123 chapter 4 . 1/8/2016 Larten is perfect , is he not? |
1yaoiyurispazz chapter 5 . 4/24/2014 Wha! It was so beautiful! I really loved this fanfiction, keep up the good work! :D |
Anonymus chapter 5 . 6/12/2012 Yup, fainted like a fangirl. |
Freaxx chapter 5 . 7/13/2011 amazing..just amazing! |
Freaxx chapter 4 . 7/13/2011 ...wow... |
Freaxx chapter 3 . 7/13/2011 Aww! ;3 so sweet! |
Freaxx chapter 2 . 7/13/2011 hehe can this get any better? |
Freaxx chapter 1 . 7/13/2011 *grin* next chapter? |
Dragon Rhapsody chapter 5 . 11/23/2010 I love it :D Well, I suck at reviewing but I just love doing it xD I hope you wouldn't mind. |
qlrk chapter 5 . 6/10/2010 Just wondering, but why isn't this story under 'completed'? Anyway, poor Darren- A whole month without Larten. And with all that thinking bothering him too. Larten is a poor thing too, because of Arra's death. But really, those two can be such idiots. Another reason why they resemble Ed and Roy, they're both smart but sometimes-sometimes. . . D'awwwwwww. He fainted XD How cliche. But so lovable. I scared for a second that they would do it on the couch, but you quickly fixed that x) I'm an old romantic, so what? *sideglance sidelglace pout* Damn Larten, be less formal for once. But I guess it's a habit. This is really my favourite chapter-not only cause of that smut! Really! I'm not that perverted to automatically like something cause it's smutty- but because of how everything wraps together. I'm such a sucker for happy endings. Thank you so much for writing this! I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I'm going to go hunt around your stories for more fics now. Once again, thank you! |
qlrk chapter 4 . 6/10/2010 AWWWW. You had me sad from the first sentence. I was wondering, since Larten never said those three words. Poor Darren D8 This whole story is kinda sad once you finish reading the whole saga, too D8 I never really hated Debbie, but now I could hit her with a brick. Stupid Woman. Stupid Darren. I don't have much to say about this chapter, it seems shorter than the others? And I won't lieand say it's my favourite, too. So, to my favourite chapter! 8D |
qlrk chapter 3 . 6/10/2010 Hehe Larten is so sneaky x) And gosh, I could kill Evra for interrupting that. But if it wasn't for him they would have ended up in Larten's van, I think. I was worried for a minute that Larten was gonna take advantage of Darren o.o (Slapself) But you that oh so perfect and fluffy, again-not to sappy either. And you tricked me! I thought the smut had finally come when Larten went to grabt that bottle of something. But oh well. Those two also remind me of Roy and Ed in a way (yeah, I read your FMA fics too 8D - just to say, I adore 'Show Me Love' -Darren saying Larten's name is somehow sexy o.o But Larten is a sexy name XD Kay, next chapter! |
qlrk chapter 2 . 6/10/2010 I notice that you always pull me in from the first sentence, and I idolize you for that. I've never been able to do that with my fics. It's always a rough ride in the beggining before it starts to flow. Again, Darrenis adorable, and I love how you portray him! Not too sappy, but lovable all the same, and still mostly in character. Ha! He thought of Larten as butt-ugly XD I can see that so clearly. x) D'awwww. The "mouth thing". Darren. Is. So. Cute x) Another reason why you're so awesome. Wahhhh, I so wanted to read Larten returning the favor. To the next chapter again x) |