Use the correct word type, I.e. 'There/their/they're', 'to/too'; please do- thanks- good story anyway. However would a Timelord really have the generic name "Chloe"(and referencing Jenny doesn't count, since Donna Noble gave her her name), something more Gallifreyian, or it would be better, if you simply stated at one point "Chloe" was a rough translation to English. All in all an interesting story.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AMAZING BOOK!

Brilliant so far. More please

Ahh! Great story! Amazing! Can u PLZZZ write more tho?!:)

por favor, continua, esta historia es asombrosa. Ya quiero saber las nuevas aventuras del doctor y su hija, por favor no tardes

just satrted ur story and its REALLY good ... so well done x

this great story keep up the good work

Please update?! It's been 6 years!

I really love this story! I can't stop reading it! But... Near the end, when you tried to write 'shut' it came out 'shit'. It made me giggle but you might wanna consider fixing it. But seriously, I love it!

I am no obsessed w/ the word antidestablishmentarianism! Did you know it has 28 letters in it? 11 vowels and 17 continents.

tardises aren't built, they're grown. but otherwise good

This is the best story yet! Why don't people make anymore like this?

love it
love it
Love it!

I'm hooked!Love this story. Eberyones in character and I love the humour.

hello, by the way, my name is Chloe, i read your story, it is fantastic! and because it had Chloe, it felt like i was that chloe in the story and I was living the adventure itself. You have basically just added a character to live the adventure, you are improving the adventure by proving to the Doctor and Chloe that they are not alone.