This is a well written story. I like how you used the four seasons to describe the personalities of the Pervensie children, and how you used words to make it come alive.

no words. just love. and gratefulness ..

That's right, winter does end. Just like the hundred-yeard-old one that Narnia used to have. So, there's no longer a reason for Edmund to hate winter or any of the seasons because of that never-fading guilt. After all, isn't that what his siblings are there for?

Yes indeed. The four seasons complete the year. It won't feel, or be right without the other. All of them . . . they always come. Maybe not as one, but they are made for ONE. They may not always come together, but they're never apart, either.

The subject might have been cliche, but delightfully so. You brought your own thoughts and observations to bear along with some really really insightful comments. I thought it came together really nicely and that you did find ways for each of the Pevensies to match a season without being out of character.

The similar structures in juxtaposition with each other were great.

Sapphireswimming

wow...

great idea, amazing ending )

Love it!

Luna

That was so good! I was all happy and then it got to Susan's last line, and it was so good and so sad and so well written I almost cried! :D

So perfect. At first I had Lucy and Peter switched but it makes much more sense the way you have it ;) Well done!

This was sweet and... poetic, in a way, because it was completely true. Peter and Lucy's part could be argued, but I think this is basically how it is, especially Susan, who can be cold and warm, like autumn. I read this a few months ago and then somehow it got deleted off my Favourites and I spent twenty minutes looking for it again. :)

Very clever-I enjoyed this story alot (despite being cliched ;D). You fit the seasons to the characters very well, and your descriptions were perfect. ;) Well done!

I really like Ed's part, since he's my favorite character. Thoughtful, and a little emo.

Though, I tend to think that Lucy is the spring, for her innocence and cheer. Susan is the autumn's grace. Pete is the bright sunny day of summer.

I really like it! Winter and fall happen to be my favorite seasons and my birthday is in November.

aw...this was sweet, powerful, and insightful. Great job. :)

okay then...that was a little...much but I can roll with it.

Beatiful! Quite well thought out...and not *very* cliched. :PI was surprised that you have Edmund as winter, but I suppose he was for a while.

Well done!