| Reviews for Beat This |
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ROCKO chapter 1 . 12/9/2011 LMAO FUNNY! |
Darkprince2040 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 It's very cleat who wears the pants in the relationship. |
HACKTHEPLANET chapter 1 . 11/29/2010 Love it. I loved this movie and this is a great continuation of this. Hopefully you will make more stories. |
SpartanLegend chapter 1 . 11/23/2010 Amazing! Simply amazing. This story has just the right amount of everything in it and the characters thoughts/dialogue is exactly how it should be. Only one very small critique, its a minor grammar error, nothing big but here it is. When it says "he caught effortlessly" it should say "he caught her effortlessly". Not a big deal but I figure I'd just point that out. Other then that I love this story. I hope you'll consider writing more of this story even though you wrote this 9 years ago. If not, I would be honored to continue the writing with this as the starting point. I would also give you due credit by letting everyone know that you started this and I am just continuing your story. |
tina chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 awesome! wish there was more ! |
Justin Huston chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 Just one question. Why did they end up back at her house? |
Lord Inquisitor Kriss chapter 1 . 2/4/2008 wow, not bad. but that wasn't really enough to need the 'M' rating |
Kit Larsen chapter 1 . 1/26/2008 Simply put, delightful. |
Angelic Messenger17 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008 thats cute i love that they just show up, and watch a little before announcing themselves...lol |
hellopants chapter 1 . 1/24/2008 haha! that was great! i love that the boys just show up! |
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 9/9/2007 I LOVED it! Please write more! You write the characters really well and have me wanting more :( please update! |
anon chapter 1 . 6/29/2007 YEah |
Bite16 chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 Kick ASS! I love this fic! I wish more people wrote Hackers fanfiction. Bite16 |
Nightmare2046 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006 Please by all means keep it is a really good story. |
Jules chapter 1 . 12/18/2005 thatw as a pretty good story... you should go on... a couple more chapters would be nice |