This was going so well!
NEVER EVER say you suck. Or write it. Ever. Kinda or a bit or whatever. Don't do it.
I liked it. I wanted more Vincent of course but you totally teased us at the end by cutting it short abruptly. She went to get some ice and Vincent touched her pink poofy covered back and then...?

i like it but wishes it was longer

Wow,a covert compliment and fleeting touch and OH so electrifying emotions and you thought you were not pleased? Just how good of a writer are you?

i LOVED this and would love it even more if you continued it! ;)

Subtle romance. The best kind. I almost never squeal. I squealed at the end.

This was incredible. I loved how in-character everybody was. Cid and Yuffie were hilarious, as usual. I would pay money to see Cloud in a frilly pink dress, and I can only imagine how well Vincent wore that suit. Thanks for sharing!

I REALLY liked this; Tifa isn't either a tomboy nor a girly girl, but the balance was perfect. And Vincent's character was very well done; I liked how easy it seemed for you to weave him in, so delicately, so as not to make him overbearing.

And I liked the last paragraph very much; got a slight shiver up my spine!

This was a great, humorous fanfiction. While not high on the Vin/Tifa pairing I enjoyed this more without it. Great job!

This is very good. It is a more subtle relationship, which is how any Vincent relationship would probably be.

This was very well-written, except that it seemed to run out of steam in the end; the end doesn't feel very conclusive. Were you planning on expanding it, or leaving it as a one-shot? (The former would explain the inconclusive feel.)

All in all, though, it was funny, sweet, and an over-all good read.

U have to continue! :D

Wow, I'm officially in love with you now. Because Vincent/Tifa is a favorite of mine, and this entire fic is just so good!

I was laughing at the imagery - Cloud and the dress, Cid and "goddamn feminine wiles" - so Cid, SO perfect. And your Vincent AND Tifa were just so well written. I'm really loving all your stuff!

Aw, I wish it was longer with a little more Vincent-Tifa action P

Agh! It's so short! Please, please, please write more fast! I love it! Ok, enough !, sorry. But anyway, please update soon. (P.S. this may be Padfoot's e-mail but I'm her friend who shares her account cause I don't have an e-mail. Just so you know.)

This was cute and well written. I especially like Marlene. I remember how much fun it was to dress up in a pretty dress when I was little. I loved it (wearing the dress and the story).

~Padfoot