Wow, two Mai-centric genfic in the space of ten minutes. This must be my lucky day. Usually it's hard to find just one. That said, thanks for writing such a briliantly-portrayed Mai. The sentences all fit her perfectly. I love the way you used the themes too. Very well-done. I didn't spot any errors, and everything read very smoothly. I love the abstract feeling from this. Nice.

A humble request: Can I archive this in my C2? It's for YGO! female-centric genfic

.DRABBLES. That said, I must say that yours are among the best I've read. Might sound weird, but they reminded me of Hiku poems. Short, but each sentence conveyed such power and emotion. It must have been quite a task to achieve this and you handled it wonderfully.

Yes! Someone's doing a fic about Mai! Wohoo! :D

Anyhow, I really liked this. I have only seen this sort of challenge be done once before here on ffnet though, so I am sort of new to it :P

I really liked the sentences to "Cold" (it really describes her), and "Two" is the unbeatable of all of the sentences here. Mai in a nutshell I think _ "Fresh" was also a nice-introspective that I appreciated. "Moth" says a lot too, you give a lot of reason for her staying alone there. "Summer" really showed a lot of how she used to be and is now, giving nice contrasts. "Butterfly" was really nice, I like usage of metahpors _

All in all; I think you've gotten her character pretty accurate here, and I like how you portray her lonlieness as well as her fondness of the Yuugi group.

A well appreciated read, I'm glad you decided to write this!

That was nice.

I can't tell you how happy I am to find a fanfic that is Mai-based. You've portrayed her brilliantly.

Am adding you to alert so as not to miss the Ritsu fic. _