| Reviews for Second Chances |
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cmend3z0221 chapter 9 . 6/26/2017 What Riley wants for Christmas? What did Ryan gave Troy for Christmas? |
cmend3z0221 chapter 8 . 6/26/2017 Ryan gave Troy a second chance and be part of his and daughter 's life? Be with them part of the family and live together? |
cmend3z0221 chapter 2 . 6/26/2017 Will Troy get a chance to be with Ryan? Ryan give Troy a second chance to be with him? |
cmend3z0221 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017 Troy denied that' it's him? Will talk get know each other again? |
ImaGreekmyth chapter 9 . 9/1/2014 So. What'd he get? |
Animeyaoimaster chapter 8 . 12/27/2012 This is such an awesome story...it's too bad you just have two stories especially of this couple because you are really gifted. :D |
xBroken-Glassx chapter 9 . 7/31/2011 Gah! This is so INCREDIBLY beautiful! I feel so stupid and negligent that I haven't read this story sooner! No kidding, this one swept me off my feet. I wasn't even in the mood to read, and I read the whole thing! My goodness, where do I even begin? Your writing is, for the most part, flawless! There are a few technical errors here and there but everyone has those, so don't fret. But what makes it flawless is the voice you have in it. You have somehow captured Troy's inner personality and made it shine in a way I haven't read yet. Your style was fluid and came at ease, which probably contributed to my instant obsession with it. In short, it was by god amazing! And then there's the plot. I love every single bit about it. I love futurefics and I especially love the idea of them parenting. But you know what I love more than that? Someone who can write that situation perfectly. And you, my friend, have accomplished that! Riley was absolutely adorable and Troy's parental instincts with her were just too cute to watch. My heart just melted over and over again. And then there was Ryan. I was glad the situation of how he obtained her wasn't through him having a one night stand with someone. That is a bit overdone. His switch to business and how he took over the company was totally a thought I've had before. That in later years, someone would eventually have to take over. And Ryan would be more willing for the part than Sharpay would be. Anyway, all the characters were cast beautifully. All of them were written well and completely in character. I mean, sure they were a bit different, but I hardly noticed it because it came off naturally. It just defined how much they matured in their adult lives. I also enjoyed that the story wasn't vulgar and that they didn't really kiss until the end. It was cool to see that they didn't exactly need intimacy to bring them together. They had enough chemistry as is. I think that's what made the story the most intriguing. Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see them kissing more, but this story was beautiful without the sexual tension. So, as obvious, I am completely in love with your work. And I'm definitely going to hurry over and start reading the sequel. I believe you mentioned a possible trilogy and I cross my fingers that it's still in effect. Either way wonderful job, wonderful characters, and I hope you keep with the storyline as long as you possibly can. D |
Na-san chapter 8 . 4/26/2009 I LOVE THIS FIC! |
charl88 chapter 8 . 10/30/2008 aww that was SO cute |
charl88 chapter 7 . 10/30/2008 aw adorable |
charl88 chapter 6 . 10/30/2008 aww that chapter was so cute |
charl88 chapter 5 . 10/30/2008 aw poor ryan and yeah troy fight harder |
charl88 chapter 4 . 10/30/2008 aw poor troy ryan so wants him |
charl88 chapter 3 . 10/30/2008 aw im like riley i never ask for help when i really shud |
charl88 chapter 2 . 10/30/2008 aww that was a great chapter |