I don't usually review, but I also don't usually read such well-rounded stories. This one was great from start to finish. It felt like an episode of the show. The flow, the characterization, the ending, all of it. Excellent.
Thanks for the read,
DB726

Ooh, I really enjoyed this! I liked how the mystery and case unfolded, and Sam and Dean living that conversation over and over and over. I'm really fond of anything of the time loop variety, and I loved how you used it to slowly clue us in to what Dean did, each re-telling of the story inching closer and closer to the truth. Awesome!

I am really enjoying the brotherly ribbing. I have to say, I think this is the most realistic to show dialogue and actions from them I've seen. It's very well written. How they talk, the pauses, what they get embarrassed about. I even like that Sam get's quiet when he's thoughtful, and he has to play a game of darts to get Dean to talk. Even the awkwardness when Dean tells him to have a vision, I can see them sitting in the Impala talking. I think it's so cute that he never looks down on Sam, and leans down to make eye contact. Also really liked that Dean asked if he had "seen anything". It's always a treat when people mention Sam's powers, sometimes I feel like they are forgotten! Also very happy for the differences in the brothers and their different strengths, such as Sam being more "set up to remember". I dislike when the brother's go through the same exact experiences. (coughPurgatorycoughHellcough) But overall very well done, and a well made, believable memory and feelings for Dean. *applaud!* Your writing deserves a follow and fav, will definitely check out the rest later. )

I could not stop reading-this was a fascinating case and also a perfect glimpse of the brothers' relationship!

I really dig this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review June 2016

I wasn't expecting anything from this story and was increasingly delighted and enthralled as it developed. Not just a very good use of the rinse-repeat technique but particularly apt for the Winchesters and to get to the truth of the matter. Another wound excised and cleaned out, so very well done. The structure was handled very adroitly and I thoroughly enjoyed every single second of this gripping tale. Thank you very much for the pleasure of reading.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review - June 2016

Written back in 2006, this story made me feel as though I was watching an episode from that era. A satisfying plot leaves room for plenty of brotherly interaction and introspection. A good solid read.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review - June 2016

This story had me going. I had no clue it was going to turn into a 'repeat the same stretch of road until the truth is told' type of story. Sam and Dean never did find out what exactly it was that was 'haunting' the bridge, but if it was in fact, Friske's spirit, then he really did a number on them. Excellent job of showing where Sam and Dean's heads were at during the whole hunt, and how Sam was the one that managed to retain enough memory to help them out at the end, while still maintaining a sense of unreality. Nice touch, having the curse of the repeating time happen because Dean used his blood to create the sigils, instead of the chalk. Complacency is never a good thing, especially for hunters, as the boys found out. This was a wonderful way to have a truthful moment between the brothers, that showed just how dependent Dean was on his family. Very nice ending as well.

Hey. Just wanted to let you know that this was awesome! Great story, great dialogue. Really awesome work!

*grabs an oxygen mask* That was potent! You kept the characters SO well in personality, it was visual! Dean's story made me shiver. This was just a wonderful piece of work and I'm amazed you packed so much into so little a space!

"Dean had always needed him more than he needed Dean, and the idea shamed him."-wow. Again, that sends chills down my back because it's the most frightening truth about Dean. He uses masks and pretension and fronts everyone with an abundance of personality. But inside he's insecure with an inferiority complex; a little boy who grew up too fast and not at all. He has abandonment issues and, oi, we're going to face that again this season.
Thank you sooo much for the time and effort you spent to write this story. :)

Nice job.

Creepy and such great Dean and Sam.

Wow.

sid

That was fun, seeing some insights into what Dean had been doing. Liked it.

Jesus! Some stories are so incredible, you read them and can't think of what to say. This was one of them. It was just amazing. Perfect Sam and Dean, right on with the mytharc, the series, everything. This is the kind of story I want to read if, God forbid, the writers' strike keeps the show from us for any considerable length of time. I bow to your mastery! Love, Robin

I liked, I liked! Original and tense. You kept Sam and Dean in character for the most part. VERY well written! Now I'm off to read the rest of your fics!

I'm greatfull you chose to share.

Cat

That story was wonderful. I really loved how it was written. Definately an interesting take on the old "Groundhog's Day" theme.