Great story, especially when there is a lot of Donatello and the teamwork between the brothers. :)

I really liked it, I liked how you set up the recon mission to be lead by Donatello. Plus you had Michalangelo's charater there and you used him to the best of of his abilities. Don and Mikey are a really good team together and could probably do great things, like teaching Leo and Raph to work together. There were a few error but everyone makes them so no biggy. By the way I love the whole prono scene bewteen the brothers, that was pretty funny how you made Leo protray Splinter already knew because he watched it with them. Awesome Job!

Fantstic story ecspecially for your first attempt at fanfiction. The story line was excellent the only sugestions I have are maybe get a BETA (P.S. If i get to read more stories like this I'm totally offering myself up) and formatting but I've already seen you got the hang of that. I LOVE DONATELLO please write more stories focussed on him. Also great mix of 1987 and 2003 ninja turtles

that was freaking SPIFFY! ! ! ! I loved this story and you wrote it so incredibly well. Thank you so much for sharing this it made my night _

This is a GREAT story! It took some time searching through the TMNT archive to find it, but I'm really glad I did!

good job

Wow, that is such a cool story _ It took me a few days to get through it, but I'm really glad I did. It's so full of brotherly love :) ... um, not that kind. On a similar note, I can't believe Raph and Leo watched a porn movie together! That's outrageous! Lol

Write more!

Sasami!

Lol that story was entertaining and funny at parts. I loved the brothership that the turtles portrayed in the story. You did a very nice job!

Really good! I hope you write another soon

I am so glad you finished it. It is one of my favorite stories!