hey just to let you know you have miss spelled Kagome and Sango in this chapter. (I dunno if I'm right but did you spell their names based on how you heard then, just a guess). not hating, just letting you know. so far I really like this fanfic .

"it has been five gays" Chapter 18 xD

Im dead.. anyway its a pretty good story except the misspelled words. some are funny some are annoying.

Now is not the same as know. A lot of it is misspelled. Some places there should be space. Ever heard of auto correct or good grammar? The plot was a bit dry. Needs work.

yes tessaiga

this story should be impossible. come on! inuyasha is not that kind, sure he care about kagome but he usually doesn't show them.

please get the name right, it is KAGOME, ka-go-ME

You know as far as mistakes go this is a pretty big one. How could you not notice that you spelled Kagomes name wrong?

I like this story and where it's going, I know you said some spelling errors, but most of your errors are in the names of the characters. Kagome, Naraku, Sango, Kaede, are the few I have seen. I know it's difficult to proof you own stuff, 'boy do I know' but please just fix the names. Also you could ask someone to beta your stuff to check for errors. Just some helpful hints, good luck!

for a girls name i would suggest Hanako meaning flower child but its only a suggestion keep up the good work

i hope you know that Iki is a boys name not a girls name, but other then that the story is great keep up the good work.

How the hell are you writing this story when you can't even spell some of the main characters names it's kagome and naraku

I enjoyed your story. It got to grin a lot.

Tetsaiga

I did notice the spelling errors but I won't mention it. Because it's your first story attempt. But I enjoyed it, in fact I loved it. Now if Inuyasha could just stop calling Kagome a wench then that would be even better. Keep up the good work!

Tetsusaiga is the name of Inuyasha's sword.