| Reviews for Whipping boy |
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Bruce Crain chapter 1 . 12/29/2013 I found this story quite engaging. You depict the growing chemistry between the characters well. I was sorry to come to the end. Is there more available on line now? Or do you need to GET BUSY AND WRITE SOME MORE? Thanks for a good read! |
Freak-of-the-night21 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009 Please no slash |
DrakarysxUnbroken chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 I agree. My friends and I even gave them a name BWahahahaha But yeah, I agree that those two have a lot of chemistry in the ring. I so want to write my own story about them but I don't know how people will take it:P Anyway, great job! |
of wonderlands and alices chapter 1 . 6/6/2007 i must have read this piece at least...six times or something. xD it's awesomenessxcore. as mentioned previously, the dinner line was great but there was also another line that made me crack up: [“And it was the locker or your face. And, well, my dad always told me not to bite the hand that feeds you. So, the locker it was.”] hahaha, i can so imagine shawn saying, 'the locker or your face' to someone who's just helped him with his injuries. _ g'job. man, this shows the real extent of my procrastination (i can't believe i put reviewing off for so long). i hope to see more work from yah! :D |
xFireSpritex chapter 1 . 4/10/2007 “Hey, you’re the one groping me. You could at least buy me dinner first.” best line. I cracked up laughing cause it's such an HBK thing to say. Love this story, nicely done. I love how well you write Cena. |
JadeAndKate chapter 1 . 9/25/2006 Thanks for sharing. This was very nicely done. I'm amazed I haven't seen more with this pairing. Congratulations on maintaining the intensity with a little humor, too. I'm a sucker for touches like that. -Kate |
GOTHCHICKLEXX chapter 1 . 9/12/2006 very nice |
El Tejano chapter 1 . 8/1/2006 He he, I love it. |
PartyOnTheMoon chapter 1 . 7/25/2006 I finally had time to read it. :) SRC, you never cease to amaze me. |
Amorye chapter 1 . 7/2/2006 Awesome! I've been waiting for something like this to come out. Faves! : ) |
sploink8654 chapter 1 . 5/16/2006 ...OH-Mah-God. ... I am NOW sure I NEED more of John and Shawn massaging each other or something. Like...srsleh. And more of those snappy, "I'm not gay, and that's why this is a joke," lines, you know the ones. I hearts you, this was good. I liked it a lot! MORE! |
LeahMarie chapter 1 . 5/12/2006 that was great i liked it! |
Funky In Fishnet chapter 1 . 5/12/2006 Intense, pained and realistic. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it muchly :- ) |
XBeautyOfARoseX chapter 1 . 5/11/2006 Wow i like it |