OMG u have to carry on and quickly

PLEAS UP DATE! I love this story Oh my God! they cant take their hand off hinata Heheh love it! Hinata forever

This is ny most no1 favorite pls countinue to write this one Pleas... thank you

Such an extreme pity that this was not updated for so long. One of the best and most..erotic in it's subtleties stories out there for ANY genre. That it involves HInata is all the better. I never considered her with her teammates before honestly but I may have a new addiction. The way you wrote them is just delicious.

I'm just loving this story. I love the way that you have the grown Hinata, everyone always either have her too strong or too weak.

Well what can I say bout shino and Kiba?I just love those two with all my heart and I love the way you have them protective of Hinata and how you have her so comfortable with the boys.

Lets see what you bring us next chpt.

uh oh kiba is mad great plz continue

i love how Shino and Kiba are. And of course a more confident Hinata

That Yuu guy sounds creepy. I loved the scene where she slapped and told off the perv. Really great story and it's seems to flow rather smoothly. I hope nothing to bad happened to Shino.

*glares* YUU! *points accusing finger* Why is it that every guy that ends up torchuring Hinata has to have that name! *has read another fic in which Hina-chan was raped by a guy named Yuu*

Ahem...anyways, now that that's out of my system...

Wonderful job, It's stories like this that make me stick around looking at fanfics, even with couples I'm not known to swoon over, the quality is amazing.

Now...for the critique...Hinata is a little too Ooc for my tastes...I know she's older now and is more confident, and that's fine...it's just that she's a bit too...foreward. It just doesn't seem all that right in her character is all. After all, no matter how old she gets, she's still Hinata, sweet, kind Hinata.

But other then that, this is starting to seem more of a ShinoXHina fic then a ShinoXHinaXKiba fic. Now, that's all fine and good (dang, wanted to see more with all three. T.T) but I'd suggest putting in more time with Kiba and Hinata interactions...The poor boy's turning this into a one-sided relationship between him and Hina, and Hina's just concentraiting on Shino. (Though it is nice for Shino to get the spotlight, after all, he's the second most underappreciated character in the series)

It also might be good to get a few more shots with all three of them together carring for one another... They all love eachother right?

...yeah...long review...sorry about that...but keep up the good work! Seriously, this story is great, update soon!

XSuicuneX out.

Please, Please, PLEASE update soon...

I love your story so much!

Nice story.

please update soon!

are you going to upload the fifth chapter anytime soon?

neat story. It's nice to see the way they protect one another. What happened to Shino though? Is the butterfly gonna play a part in finding him?

that was really good. Don't worry about it being to long; the longer the better. You're doing a really good job, I just want the next chapter to be up!

i love the relationship team 8 has with each other. i like how you've made them grow together. very good. definately on my alert list!

team 8 love