This story is going well, except for a few flaws that are not too big.
1. Chapters are WAY too long and need to be cut short and put in more chapters
2. Characters (mainly Gaara) are quite OOC
3. Story is WAAAAAAAAAAAY too rushed. They got married in Chapter 3, then had child in chapter 5! Seriously man, go slower!
4. Not very much violence

Other than that, I like it so far! :)

I wouldve read this but my sisters name is Raine, spelled exactly like that and i just couldnt without picturing my short chubby curly hair sister. Well written from what i did read tho!

shit. just. got. real. I shall stay tuned

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS ONE CHAPTER?!
it was VERY good I'm now dedicated to this R.I.P. my sleep. hahaha I wont be getting proper sleep for a while now, I'm hooked

OMG A BABY!

SASUKE YOU BASTARD!

*sniff* so emotional. I love it...You are a great author!

This was a good story in the first 6 chapters... Then I read the reviews and found out that Gaara dies.
Do me a favour and in future stories if you are going to kill off the main character make the genre "tragic"
I hate stories with sad endings, which means I have wasted 5 hours of my life reading a story that I will not finish as the author used the wrong genres...

Fuck you Saichi! Fuck. You! DX

OMFG! :D Yay, Sasuke's going back to normal! ... Kinda. :P Hahaha. Love it so far! (fyi this has taken me many days to get to this point... and I'm a fast reader. Ha.)

Oh, Ino. I just about died! Ahahahaha!

I read this story a long time ago and just recently got an account. I just wanted to say how well written this is and how developed the characters are. This story made a big impact on my life. Thank you and keep up the good writing.

This story will always be special to me. I've read it so many times over the years, and it's still just as amazing as when I first read it. Back when I had to wait for the new chapters to come out and didn't know what would happen next. This first chapter really set everything up. Your use of an OC character to compliment Gaara was perfect and wound up really making a great plot for the rest of the story. I love the romance and the value on family. The conversations between all of your characters flows so easily and naturally. You keep them all in good character! I regret not reviewing every chapter of this story when I first read it. I know I have on a few chapters, but still. You should have such recognition for a story this amazing. for 19 chapters, 141 reviews definitely doesn't cut it. Reviews should be in the thousands. Maybe it was the summary? Eh.

i have to say, you are a good writer... you should write your own book. if you ever will, let me know good luck!

HOW CUOLD YOU END IT THERE?HOW COULD THAT HAPPEN!WHT THE F* DID YOU KILL GAARA?

ANSWER ME!WHY DID YOU KILL OFF GARRA!

i really hate you.

please write more stories like this one!